A Shinobi's Tale(WIP)

Well I asked if the author author has ADHD cuz he was working on two projects at once(few secret ones too as he said) and the elemental dude started talking about how wips got closed or left unfinished and yeh that’s how it went. The reason why I asked if the author has ADHD is bcz I have ADHD myself and I can perfectly understand if he wants to work on many projects at once.

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And then I unkindly disparaged a wip he linked to

Blue lock?? I gave so much to say…

Isagi calling you trash and occasionally ignoring your stats by batmaning you (there ain’t enough plot armor for the two of us!!)

Reo should be an “RO” for the sole reason that the MC immediately gets murdered by Nagi leading to a game over everytime you pick an interaction that would initiate something.

Same thing with Chigiri kuz Ichigo wouldn’t take prisoners.

Rin would fit for the masochists, “dude isn’t a tsundere he’s just a pick” lol.

You could have us replace the monk.

… I need to layoff the bluelock chatfics shit’s getting out of hand.

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No no no, hold up let him cook now, let him cook!

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The players relationship stats are influenced almost soley by how well you do at soccer(these egoists don’t suffer uselessness)

Bachiras monster reacts to having two MCs and your performance will dictate who it suggests more (until he let’s it go at least),

Using the same stat twice in a game against isagi leads to automatical stat fail and him calling you a pretender, as teammates he’ll “devour” you and incooperate you into his game, it’s fine for others but you’re the MC too dammit (so slight stat losses) .

Strength check will never work on kunigai, agility checks fail to Chigiri or Shidou , ball handling checks fail to Nagi or Bachira, any stat has to be higher than a set amount to contest Rin so on and so forth (each of these guys are among the best at their weapons, so unless you’re world 5 you can’t be beating them at their own thing).

If you don’t have the needed stat in a situation you have a set amount of passes, do it too much and you suffer stat and relationship stat losses (“Don’t be a luke warm bastard” - Rin). Sometimes it’ll be better to just lose it in balance with having the right stats to score and using your passes.

If you mouth of to Shidou when you meet he WILL throw hands (has to happen before the shock thing) and you must be ready.

You’ll be there for the Shidou vs Kunigami match, there is no saving him though…or Isagi will depending on what Rin thinks.

You can’t dawg on Rin in the second selection regardless of stats only temporarily contesting him (for the masochists,it’d literally be the only way to increase his relationship stat, lol).

Cool

Just had a weird glitch happen. I was just about to talk to the girl with glasses and the thing just kept trying to load. No error message and no ability to even try choosing something else. Not sure what caused it either.

Hi, I haven’t updated the game in a while, I was getting character development in real life but that’s happened because the scene it links to doesn’t exist (atp in time) but now I’ve written well past that but don’t plan on actually uploading for a while😅 so bear with me, I’ll probably release the next update before December PROBABLY…

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Please take your time. This post really psyched me up.
Although I’ve been reading IF for years, A Shinobi’s Tale was one of the works that brought me to the forum.

:smile:Thank you for this masterpiece and I can’t wait to see what you have in store for the shinobi world.

P.S: I really wanna get the feel of having my own doujutsu (MC gon be all like itachi)

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it is really good keep it up ghedovic40.

Curious. If there was a script game set in the jujutsu kaisen universe using all it’s systems like cursed energy, and curses but set in another country and without any references to characters or events in the anime and manga would this be open to copyright?

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Good vibes about this one hope you keep with it

I think you’d still run afoul of copyright because your still using elements of their material and making money off of it so it probably wouldn’t be worth it

May I ask why I can’t go to the next chapter? I’m always stuck on loading

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i think that is the end of the demo my friend

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I have to disagree with you, take A Shinobi tale for example u will think author is copying the idea of the sharigan from Naruto but u will be surely mistaken since that idea has happened in other animes, that are newer and older than Naruto and I can even give a example of this like mystic eyes in fate, and just because someone can make a copy out of something does not mean it is the same, a copyright only works if maybe u are stealing like the name and ideas of the work but nothing in this game is like Naruto, due the author not writing everything done in Naruto and even he tried to do such a thing, it will obviously not work considering he has to add all ideas containing Naruto, Shippuden and Boruto :sweat_smile::sweat_smile::sweat_smile:

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Oh yh I am telling a different story borrowing from the lore that already exists in Naruto or just for Easter eggs, I’m not going to go band for band with kishimoto​:joy::sob: I just want to make a fun little “filler” based in the shinobi world we are kind of familiar with

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great idea I hope to see it published

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Is this still being updated seems like a great idea and I really enjoyed the demo

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