A Sensei's Story

I’ve haven’t been able to get the save system to work right on DashingDon.
So, I’ll just leave it. The beta ends on New Year’s Day anyway.

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I’m still playing, but it’s so funny! :rofl:

Typos
Uppercase 1

Quotation mark

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Uppercase 2

Quotation mark 2

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um yea i have a proble i cant realy play this game because it says everytime i try to move forward to play this game Please enter your email address and there no way i am inputting my email address into it everybody knows your not meant to do that so uh cant you skip that process? because if you cant there sno way of being able to play your game you creating…

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That’s part of the game – it’s asking for the MC’s email (which would make sense in a situation like this), so you can write down anything in the email questions. I just put “LOL” for all three. :laughing:

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Thank you so much!
Very helpful :+1:

Yes, exactly this. I just put a single if I want to bypass it quicker.

uh so you just put in a word?.

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Yup. Type anything you want. The information isn’t stored. I usually just type a single letter for quickness…or curse words.

I liked the game, it’s really funny at some parts and pretty fun to read.
I’d say my main issue with it is that I’m not familiar with some stuff there (like some of the people you say in jokes and stuff) so it was kinda weird to read these parts

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I haven’t laughed this much in years, honestly thank you, I’ve had a hard time this year so this was very helpful :D.

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Dude chill this is why we can’t have good things

Thank you very much. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Hi, @Adam_Juarez, I apologize if you disagree with my constructive criticism. I’m also sorry that you had an unpleasant year. I hope 2019 is better for you.

If you have any further opinions on my advice - which was meant only to assist in the writing process, as the fans of HG/CoG tend to be progressive and sensitive to issues such as racism and sexism - please direct it to my inbox, so as not to cause an issue on this thread.

Thank you and have a great new year :slight_smile:

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It’s fine. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion and they weren’t disrespectful to me. I can see their point.
This kind of humour isn’t everyone’s cup you of tea.

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Yes. That’s the best way. Thanks.

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Thanks for your feedback. Yeah, I know that feeling well.

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So for my second playthrough I was able to successfully romance Yudai and got a pretty nice ending. I also got a quick end when I chose 100 for my age, which was also great.

Here’s some typos I found:

Summary

‘Ok, Iona-sensei. we here’, says Mr Ichinose, signalling to the five-storey building with his dark eyes,
Either turn the period after “sensei” into a comma or capitalize “we”.

‘Thank you, Iona-sensei’, adds Mr Ichinose, gladly accepting the money that you hand him with bow hands and a little bow of his head.
“bow hands” should be “both hands”.

Away from Justin, so That I can focus on doing something else while I eat.
“That” should be “that”.

‘I need a durry’, He announces, sliding the pack of incendiary cancer sticks into his shirt pocket before beginning to collect the remains of his food into a small plastic bag.
“He” should be “he”.

“Do not” use the bins in here. otherwise there’ll be more flies
I think you should fix the quotation marks in this sentence and capitalize “otherwise”.

Who do you mostly want to get to know better.
Change period to question mark.

Even me, with my shamrock (shambolic) English and annyoing “Chief” archetype.
Should “annyoing” be “annoying”?

I also had some issues with the hilarious car escapade –

Summary

‘Sure. After all, this isn’t the first time someone has tried to kill me with a car in Japan’.
I can choose this line after the car appears in the park – the problem is that this was the first time the MC was attacked by a car in my playthrough. I glanced through the code, and it seems like there’s supposed to be another car attack if you go home alone after the first party, but since I went with Yudai that car attack never happened.

I also saw there’s an issue with this coding:

*if attackcar = "yes"
  You spend the next hour and a half watching the captivating light show that plays out against the city's skyline, drinking and talking the time away, bringing a pleasant and relaxing end to what has for the most part been a pretty pleasant and relaxing day...well, apart from almost being run over by a homicidal driver that is.

  *finish

*if justindanger = "yes"
  You spend the next hour and a half watching the captivating light show that plays out against the city's skyline, drinking and talking the time away, bringing a pleasant and relaxing end to what has for the most part been a pretty pleasant and relaxing day...well, apart from almost being killed by an ancient Mongolian spirit with a penchant for pants that is.

  *finish

*if (attackcar = "yes") and (justindanger = "yes")
  You spend the next hour and a half watching the captivating light show that plays out against the city's skyline, drinking and talking the time away, bringing a pleasant and relaxing end to what has for the most part been a pretty pleasant and relaxing day...well, apart from almost being run over by a homicidal driver and killed by an ancient Mongolian spirit with a penchant for pants that is.

  *finish

*else
  You spend the next hour and a half watching the captivating light show that plays out against the city's skyline, drinking and talking the time away, bringing a pleasant and relaxing end to what has for the most part been a pretty pleasant and relaxing day.

Since I was both attacked by the car and went with Justin to the Mongol tomb I should have gotten the third paragraph, but because the first *if attackcar = “yes” is also true, it just read that one and jumped to the next chapter.

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I couldn’t find any info on this but, is Ai not in any way romanceable if your character is female, no matter your choices? :disappointed_relieved:
Because I was only slightly(maybe very) disappointed when my character, whose sole reason for wanting to go to Japan was her infatuation with Asian women, wasn’t able to romance Ai, the only Asian female RO.
I did like it though, and I did like Anally(genius) as well, but she kind of ended up being the consolatory choice for when I realized Ai wasn’t an option :smirk:

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Thank you very much.
Super helpful!

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