A Darker Kind

Hosted Games Works In Progress
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I was working on my game Legend Of Endevoir when I decided that the game was just going too fast, you were put in to the middle of the action without much backstory, so I decided to redo the start of the game, but as things went, I ended up completely rewriting Legend Of Endevoir, so I decided to change the name, you can find the current version of the game at:
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/80993229/game/index.html
Any feedback is appricated, if you find any errors so far, please report them to me.

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If you pick read you get an error. It said something that makes me think you didnā€™t put *finish

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Actually it does that with any choice that isnā€™t agility, at least in my go it did

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The changes, I feel, made the game 10x better! Bravo!

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I fixed the error where if you choose anything but agility you get an error, I also added more story, also, enter the promotion code ā€œFreeSwordā€ for aā€¦free sword.

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There seems to be another error after you leave the inn, before you choose where you want to go "Line 137: Non-existent variable ā€˜betaā€™ "

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I was fixing that error when you commented about that, itā€™s fixed now.

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@Daisuke,
Can I Become A beta Tester?

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@Zed
Sure, iā€™ll message you the code.

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Someā€¦well, most of the (todo) options have not even been started yet, so if your a beta tester, upon choosing these options, you may visit the BETA INFORMATION screen.

EDIT: Added some things to the (todo) options that would normally take you to the beta information screen, just a taste of things to come when I finish the main path.

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@Daisuke
I would also like to become a beta tester if you please.

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@Azrael
Done.

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If you donā€™t mind I would like to become a Beta tester. I donā€™t have too much experience but this is a great time to gain some.

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if its still an option iā€™ll be a beta tester

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I would like to be a beta tester.

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Hm, well I like how ā€œen media resā€ it is, but the setting is painfully underdeveloped, as are the characters. Was I supposed to care about Raulin at all? The game gives me the impression that I was supposed to.

The story so far seems. . .weak. Really weak. Thereā€™s nothing at all to make me invested in it, again due to the underdeveloped feel to it.

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Iā€™d like to become a beta tester. However, where are my PMā€™s?

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@Daisuke
The text in the story needs some serious help with spacing in between character speech and other textual elements. I also agree with @13ventrm and I really donā€™t establish any connection with the characters.

That being said the story has been greatly improved from what you had before, but there is a lot more to be improved.

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Sorry I was late on updates! The power at my house decided to go out, and then facebook decided not to log me in, so I couldnā€™t access my account.
Now, what iā€™ve added:
Iā€™m rewriting the story with more detail and focus, you can see what iā€™ve got so far in the beta test tab in the main menu, iā€™m trying to come up with ideas for the story as well, if you have any ideas of what I should add/take out/add more detail to, post it on here, thanks!

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umm any choice i make for race it goes to end