I wanted to see how the idea for a life in medieval times as the son of a knight would be received. I plan on it being action laden at least at first and slowing down later. I want choices to rely less on stats (they will still have an impact on much) and more on correct choices in combat. I will soon be posting a link so you can play through what I have already written. I would appreciate constructive criticism but I don’t need any grammar tips as I have just started and have not proofread to much of it. I would really appreciate historical aid for much of it if you know what your talking about. Names of places and people are also not set in stone I only used them as fillers until I can learn what the historically correct names would be. I hope you can all find some enjoyment from this little story.
Link to what I have right now. Remember there are a ton of grammar mistakes since I have been focusing on story development thanks. http://dashingdon.com/play/bmpf15/yeoman/mygame/
I now have an editor and once I add new scenes after a couple days each scene should be updated. Thanks Again for the feed back!
I’m working on making the duel scene more in depth with combat so it may be a little while before I get it up thanks for all the support!