WIP: Through Olympus (working title) [Update: 02/09/2021]

thank you for reading! :slight_smile: athena is a maiden goddess in most lores, and as for the hunter, his name is orion.

I enjoyed everything here so far and can’t wait for more content. I thought it was a little weird that there wasn’t a description of Hermes or any build up/introduction to him. We kinda just jumped into a convo with him, but maybe that’s just my personal tastes idk. I’m excited for the ROs you’ve got planned. I’ll keep any judgments to myself until you’ve posted actual RO content or elaborate more into what you plan to do with them.

Updated today! Only discovered CSIDE as of late, and everything is suddenly easier. Unfortunately, I had to overhaul everything, so I appreciate any feedbacks regarding coding and/or about the game’s overall layout and appearance. Thanks all!

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After meeting Lord Hades it got looped and repeated the talk we had altho it only did it once

Oh, thanks for reporting! I’ll look into it!

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I really enjoyed the update and I can’t wait for more.

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thank you so much! :heart:

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The save game feature seems to have an error

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thanks for reporting! i tried looking into it, and it should start working again after a reload. let me know if you encounter any errors still! thank you!

i enjoyed the update, especially the dynamic between apollo and artemis! kinda reminds me of my own siblings haha

in the scene after you tell apollo, ‘i like you a whole lot better’, about midway it says, ‘he laughs, the sound almost like against your ears’. not sure what word is supposed to be in there but it’s missing :]

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thanks for reporting! i’ll look into it later!

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error should be fixed by now! let me know if you encounter any more others, and i’ll do my best to look into it!

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Maybe the phrase meant there is “music to my ears”.

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Very fun game! I like Apollo alot :slight_smile:
I’m unable to save w/ the save slot

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thank you! i tried looking into error, and the save slots should be fixed by reloading the page!

Whenever I pick - Bury under pillow. Curious option. Child. I get this error. Didn’t get it with other options.

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@LGonza: thanks for reporting! should be fixed by now.

as for the save errors that everyone encountered earlier, they’re now fixed. everything should be running smoothly by now and there should be no more errors when it comes to saving, but i’m not sure if the saved data is retained or not. sorry for that! :slight_smile:

This game was good last time I played but now there’s and an error stopping me from playing, so sad.

scene2 line 19: Non-existent variable ‘julian’

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thanks for reporting! i messed the code up when i was trying to upload a test file for a planned wip, and will definitely plan to fix it later. sorry for this!

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Hiya! I see you recently found CSIDE, so my commentary might not be helpful;

Right off the bat, if you choose the “slowly sit up from your bed” option, you get routed to a conversation scene rather than getting out of bed.

Since I was curious about that, I took a peak at your code and saw you have a file for each choice; maybe that was intentional, but you might have an easier time organizing the story by using *label, which will allow you to “send” readers to a specific scene within the same file the way you’re currently doing with entire scene files. (And which will spare you from having eleven thousand files to manage.) Again, since you found CSIDE, maybe you already know about that! But I thought it was worth mentioning just in case, because I think you’ll find it’s eventually much easier to organize with labels rather than a file per choice.

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