Hello, I’m Arcamiel and I’ve been wanting to make a choice script game for a while now, and finally I have something of a playtest. It’s VERY early still, and a LOT is subject to change. I’m looking for pretty much any kind of feedback and would also like to point out that english is not my first language, so if there are any grammatical errors, I’d appreciate the help.
Currently I’ve mostly finished the prologue(About 6400 words), although again, it is subject to change. I don’t currentely have a set update schedule, since I’ve just started it.
Any other suggestions are also welcome. Aside from that, I hope you have fun
In Mind over Matter you play as a male, female or non-binary person, while you discover and grow your powers. Fight for justice, or for your very own right to exist. Make your ambitions true or try to live a normal life. All that while the sarcastic, snarky voice of an ancient psionic entity speaks in your head. But beware, with the power you hold, there will be many trying to use you for their own ambitions, can you steel your will in front of this menace, or will your mind shatter under the pressure.
Last updated in 10/16/23
To playtest, go here: https://dashingdon.com/go/14749