[WIP] Dark Contract [working title] Dark medieval fantasy

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Drenched like rats, two guards stood outside a little hut, deep in the wood. Both shivered, slurping back there(<-- their) snots with their teeth and armor rattling. The only thing they could do was hold their tears and spears straight and wait, fearfully hoping, to return to their loved ones (intact as humans and) not as frogs.

The couple nodded with eyes wide open, not daring to say a word.(The) Man untied (a) small pouch from his belt,(.) (The clattering of coins could be heard from the pouchs/pouches inside, as he gave it) to the witch,(.) Who quickly stuffed it in her clothes.

(The) Mother hid her face in her husband’s chest while he didn’t avert his eyes from their son

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I dont think so? Since you are a demon :smiling_imp::joy:

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I haven’t planned out (yet) such possibility for the story line. Dark fantasies aren’t known for sugar sweet stories.

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I Will just kill Them for fun :grinning::blush:

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I have a feeling, I’ll need to write options to kill anything that moves.

*choice
Option1#Eat the cake.
Option2#Cake is a lie, kill it!

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How about just burning Them Alive? :smiling_imp:

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I also noticed that one of them wasn’t native. (It was the female, she had black hair and her skin was also a few shades darker than the man’s) Female had black hair and her skin was few shades darker than the man’s.

My energy shaped into (a) slightly transparent body. (In my new form i clapped my wings loudly, my body descend with might. I was a white hen with bright yellow feet and a red crest. My eyes glowed purple.

The witch and other two mortals(,) were at (a) loss of words and just stared (at me) . No one expected something like this.

With my energy all collected in one place I’m (a being) less noticeable by magic users. Even if I entered (the) mortal real(realm), I felt nothing. I was nothing more then a spectator that now others could see.

My energy shaped into (a) slightly transparent body. (My now) Slender elongated shape slid over the child’s body and settled on (his) chest. (I was) Covered in light speckles, brownish (color?), (a full) two meters long snake. (I) made (my) presence known with a hiss. (My) eyes burned red.

The witch and other two mortals were at (a) loss of words and just stared (at me).

:grinning:

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My energy shaped into (a) slightly transparent body. Now next to the child on the table(,) (l) proudly stood (at) 20 centimeters long water vole(.) (I had) silky yellowish-brown fur and red burning eyes. (My) pinkish nose sniffed the air eagerly.

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This is the first fan made game on here that I’ve actually taken an interest in. This has great potential, don’t mess it up! :wink:

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I’ll do my best! May the gods of typing smile upon me!

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Spank you? Jeez. Someone get me a cricket bat.

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You’re welcome.

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So if you are in the realm of the mortal’s will you be able to tell what mortal is being used as a host for a demon?

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For some yes, for some no. Demons and Spirits have ways to hide their presence.

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Survey answers:

  1. It was readable enough, though there are some problems with grammar here and there, it is quite well done.
  2. I noticed that it is probably some being that was banished and that we can act differently than we are, I mean, we are intercepting calls for spirits and acting like one, but not one.
  3. Chapter 1 seems good as it is, I like the absence of info dumps.
  4. I’d like to see the MC making a contract with some powerful noble and take over some city. Absorb all of the world’s life force, or something of the kind. >.> And I want a chance to watch the world burn too. :expressionless:
  5. Haven’t looked at the code yet. But will, eventually.
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