(WIP) Broken Fable [220k Public, Updated 5/7/24]

I think Yoru the brat kinda cute I am imagining she’s a tsundere… I would like to see how far she goes as apprentice.

I would be more interested in Poly route tho if any available.

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Agree there, especially with immortal types.

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I’d imagine the desire for some semblance of balance is the reason.

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What legend or story explains that zeus has a white beard though? On ancient vase paintings and frescoes Zeus is depicted with dark hair, only with statues is his hair white and thats because they didnt paint him. The material was white.

Edit: sorry i did not see this

Yoru always felt like too much of a kid to me, since we’re teaching her. Like, “I’m adopting this child now,” vibes.

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To be fair almost all if not most of humanity can be treated this way by Fable if age gap really concern MC that’s gonna be impossible to find pair here in story.

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I know, but something about her feels less mature. Like I need to ruffle her hair and make sure she’s getting to classes on time and pack her a lunch or something.

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You just snitch yourself hahaha

I think it’s more of her dynamic with the MC. She’s dependent on the MC and has a mentor-student relationship with them. Makes her feel younger even though MC’s age means that the age gap with other ROs isn’t that different than hers.

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Yoru feels like an immature and sheltered person in the first place, which is probably where the vibe comes from. But to be honest, I’ve seen plenty of “mature” adults act like this. An embarrassing amount of them too. And without the attenuating circumstance of having just lost everything.

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It already is. I’ve gone down the heart paths and friendly to the student. It is written well.

Mommy/daddy complex😅.

But seriously the kid Yoru have really awesome vocabulary choice with alot of swearing bratty indeed.

Then again Kaizo also curious choice, they guy can cook, have lots of connection what to not like… Except probably to be fair he need action scene of his own and cool catchy dialogue, probably later in story.

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Lucifer should be physically strong too right, after all he is a demon hybrid, if my guess is correct Lucifer himself hasn’t developed his powers properly, he also lost his angelic powers

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And wings :< I would like them back.

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Why do so many Japanese have odd colored eyes? It doesn’t seem uncommon to have blue or green eyed Japanese even though the art of an RO doesn’t reflect the text.

I guess I have to remove them.

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Should have introduced yourself as a man of wealth and taste.

Much less trouble than killing everyone you meet. /s

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As much as I would hope, that wouldn’t change a thing with that Clouded bastard. But, at the same time, I would’ve been glad it didn’t. I got my time with him and after he was nothing more than a corpse. A stain on the world, wiped out. I have no regrets.

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I’m playing my Fable as having a huge superiority complex and pretty detached from Humanity so all the mortals and Praetors are out lol. Maybe Attila!

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Yeah, that detachment is a inevitability as a Fable I think. That’s why I like Janus; it compounds it, knowing that everything will happen exactly as you see it. Two thousand years of history and nothing has ever surprised you, no death has blindsided you. It’s hard to care about anyone when you know exactly how they will die, thousands and thousands and thousands of times over.

hehe Janus thoughts

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