I’m partly fearful of bumping up my own topic, but I want to acknowledge the people who took the time to sit down and play through the quick version. I was actually surprised to see the interest people are taking into this for something I did just out of sheer curiosity. Honestly, I probably don’t want to leave it half finished myself, but it is satisfying that people want to see more. On that note:
As people have pointed out there is a number of grammatical errors and spelling errors that I seemed to have missed and it’s good that they got pointed out. Thanks. I’ll fix those as my first action.
I’m not married to the intro chapter and might give that an overhaul eventually. As well as expanding the chapter of the second part in the temple. It feels a little too sudden with everything that happens.
I cannot give an estimate when the next update is. Since it seems for the most part people enjoyed it, it makes me feel somewhat bad to say that. Though, I’'m sure people would rather wait for higher quality content then if I rushed half finished content anyway,
Other then work and daily life, I want to improve my skills with choice script(Coming a long way from not being able to manage a stat screen about a week ago). Then there’s the matter of adding better content which takes time. I think the way I want to stylize it is so that while you can get parts of the story, it will take more then one play through set of options to actually get the full background around the story (Some of you probably have a pretty good idea.) Oddly enough, some of the comments actually gave me a strange thought for a potential future minor character.
Last minute details. It feels too early for people to have a serious opinion on characters but if there are any you particularly like or hate(Of course, one of them only exists so they can be hated. You know the one.)
Also was considering the possibility of the “protagonists” having minor chapters. They won’t change anything game wise and would only be there for story wise. Though some of the M.C.'s decisions will probably surface. There will be an option to skip them since there is nothing affecting game play in them if you don’t feel like reading them.