Velocity: The Race Begins (WIP) 140k+ words

Since it’s hetero if you play as girl then the girls will not flirt with you.

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Felt like the one did. But once got past a certain point, the races, it did feel I missed out.

Good to know I will have to leave this one before race then. Thanks.

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My concern is not the girls flirting with my mc which can happen to any gay boy but me not being able to politely turn them down and male mc being auto attracted to girls by the narrative. Flirting characters of either gender is completely fine with me.

Also if it could be clarified in the original post or with a tag that this one is hetero and therefore probably not for me only that would be great.

Not as such so there may be some hope the author will take feedback on this and I suppose mc could technically still be bi but with the narrative as it stands male mc would be a heavily female preferring bi guy then. As it is currently written it seems the game is ill suited to people like me who’d like a gay mc option though.

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Is it confirmed to be hetero though? No RO was even introduced yet.

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Flirt options are there for the girl teen. I avoided it.

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Alright!!! I’m back and I’m pumped!!! :muscle::man_lifting_weights:

Been quite a busy few weeks but my schedule has finally opened up. I’ve been writing the whole time during my silence so I’ve already written a little more than half of the book already.

As for your questions I’ll do my best to answer them one by one. I do apologize for taking so long to respond. You know how life is sometimes😉 Ain’t no one tell me adulting was this hard.

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I’ve decided there won’t be any romance in this game and these are a couple reasons:

  1. The game is shorter in length, so I don’t feel I’ve had enough time to build a plausible reason for a relationship, unlike Hunter Sky were I can take my time to build a realistic bond. And too add the time span of the events in universe is very short.

  2. Less stuff to code LoL :laughing:. Instead of romance I want to explore some other aspects of the characters and their struggles. I want to explore the criminal underworld and how deeply involved the MC can get, plus how the races will be organized. I’d rather spend time coding for stuff like that. To add, if I write romance I only feel comfortable writing a storyline around it rather than a single generic narrative that can be used for ever character. It feels fakes, as opposed to having a different experience with each RO.

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Don’t worry dude. You and Brock will get to tango alright :smiling_imp:.

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That’s fine by me, I still would love to wreak some havoc in the crime world lol.

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Lol thanks where the demo ends for now. I’ll consider adding rest for some beta testing once it’s full done.

Sorry for not knowing this, but what does Ll mean?

Thank you I really appreciate it!

I answered a similar question a little above this reply.

Thank you for the feedback! Much appreciated!

I’ve already written more than half of the book but I was hoping to go ahead and finish up the whole thing since I’m almost done.

Shoot em away soldier! Lol thanks :blush:.

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Thanks! It’s so ironic that you say that cause I wrote Britney and Amaya to be mortal enemies lol. Two different people.

I have no idea who keeps flagging these questions but I guess it’s a mod maybe.

I commented on a similar post a above this reply.

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Fair enough, though I would still like a setting that removes the automatic attraction male mc seems to feel towards women and let my mc be gay or asexual even if there will be no ro’s.

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CMIIW I think LI means Love Interest

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You should probably add an asexual option then

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