Velocity: The Race Begins (WIP) 140k+ words

Good news guys. I’ve updated the game and added a couple more chapters.
https://dashingdon.com/play/matt-fusin-/velocity-the-race-begins/mygame/

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About beating Brock in the race, is it a stats thing or do need to make the right sequence of choices.

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Let’s fucking gooooo

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So can you beat Brock or you just can’t?

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After jason mentions our mom when I click the choice it wont allow me too move foward and thats for all the choices

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you can’t, cause he is gonna cheat always at the end

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Lol i wouldnt call it cheating the guy was desperate to not lose so he used his wild card so to speak. You can defintly with the right choices be leading him all the way through out until he does use the Nos.

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But I think it’s illegal to use Nos in the race. At least that was the expression I had.

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Is there any possibility of us romancing Amaya or are we just going to play the role of a wingman for Matthias

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I think author already said they weren’t going to implement romance in regards to the MC so don’t think so.

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Anyone got pass with jason after the interrogation?

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Why because mc could say its cheating? Its freaking illegal street racing there wasnt any rules listed or stated its win the race or dont.

Now i didnt select the option to say it but i dont think it would do any good infact likely would do more harm.

@Azan_Ali as the previous poster stated the author allready said there would be no romance in game. So baring them changing there mind the anwser is nope.

@Fusion_Ultimatum speaking of the race and the choices we could make during and after something felt off when i didnt my quick run through earlier in the night. Will half to play again at some point but might want to check it at some point to see if everything flows well no matter what sequence of choices we make as players.

I did run into a error when leaving the police station and mc and jason was standing outside the last option cropped up some kind of start achievement error. Not sure about the other choices yet.

All that said i loved seeing the race and the interesting ramifications of every thing or where they might lead to. Pissing off brock the entire way through made me smile.

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How odd. I made to chapter five without an issue. Can you screenshot the error pls?

I’ll go back and read it over but could you tell me what exactly felt off?

Our friend Yunggeen seems to havr encountered a problem. Has anyone been able to make it to the gang choices?

I only made it as far as the police station and getting to the side walk… as to what felt off its hard to say hence why i will half to play again i just recall it being in the race portion itself. When i get a chance will play again and fildde withh saves so i can go through different choices.

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Okay :blush:. I really appreciate the feedback by the way. I don’t wanna have anything feeling off in this book. I’ll read through myself and see what I can fix, in the meantime.

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So there is gang choices? Im assuming its after the police station lol

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Just finished the game

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Wat you chose too get pass the sidewalk with jason?

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