Just had the chance to try this title and Is a mixed feeling. I feel like is written good but some parts of the story doesn’t add up pretty well:
I mean we start with a guy/girl who is clearly a young adult (I place it around 24/30 years old). There is a build up to: yeah my grandpa made me learn stuff on how to survive by leaving me alone in the forest, I was inspired to pursue this extremely hard career, I’ve done and reached this objectives nobody else did, I’m so talented etc… But in the end I’m a washed up young adult who end up taking care of a ruined store in a little town in the middle of nowhere and with a lot of debt to repay (I don’t even know yet how the Grandpa become a “so beloved character, a pillar of the community” aside the hinted vigilante role. But the guy sound more like a cranky old man, and more easy for people to go: “ah yeah the crazy old dude who owned the shop there, what happened to him?”).
Don’t get me wrong, I still like it, the eerie feeling something is wrong in town come out pretty well from the start, the setting too is kinda understandable and can feel empathy for it (three friends: Salem, Adam and the protagonist who started with great ambitions in their teens years but still in their middle 20s and 30s are stuck in a precary situation with the death of the old man return in touch with each other) in a way is kinda sweet (take a new restart in life and rekindle old relationships).
But my main corcern are that little details that kinda make me lose interest in the whole concept/story
For example
I’m Still confused on how by shooting at his leg with a rifle Adam lost use of both of them at the same time. In a situation like that I would’ve thinked he would’ve a stump instead of a foot (if he had a hunt rifle or a shotgun) or be limping around like Dr. House not be confined on a wheelchair, paralyzed from the waist down (I think it was choosen this situation on purpose just for the story it make more impact and that kinda deprive me the empathy for this character).
or How this bunch of people come to work together against the vampires (Salem, Adam and the protagonist make sense, heck the teen girl who is written like a 13 years old for how she act make sense too (she knewed the grandpa) but I can’t see how she out of the blue decided: “Yeah the nephew of the old store owner, A goth girl, a guy in a wheelchair, my school teacher and the heir of a prestigious family (+ an annoying clerk who doesn’t know how to take a no for answer) are exactly the Team I’m searching for beat the monsters!” XD
I would’ve expect her more trying to start with a team of teenagers of her own (the kids of the town, the new “blood” generation) but lose them all on the way (because they did what teens do, throw themself in dangerous situations without thinking) and you as the “adult” discover the problem and with your own pals join in to give your help. Because mostly I feel like the main character is not self conscious of his/her own age (at the start he meet the police officer, I would think if that side character was a teen back in the day you were in town, she have the same age of you as the main character). Is just strange see main character who was away for years suddenly throw himself/herself in this situation with some people it doesn’t even know. Then again is a easy read and you don’t focus too much to some things is an enjoyable game.