Also can you describe the characters and sceans with vivid imagery, I am very curious as to how you incision every character, perhaps even a way to set the appearance of the main character at the beginning of the novel would be fun.
I would love nothing more than to volunteer for beta testing.
I got to drawing again, and my character from UnNatural was the lucky one who put to the canvas this time. Thanks for helping me stoke the creative fires, @Nocturnal_Stillness!
Edit: I realized that Gyazo links arenāt permanent. Whoopsydaisy. WARNING-- big drawing because I donāt draw small. LOL
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Looks really good! It always intrigues me how people imagine an Azureās wings 
Hi all still looking for some nonbinary readers to test the new nonbinary path.
Update:
The beta testing of the main game and the new nonbinary path has gone well and Iām almost ready to submit the update. Iām just going over the achievements and considering some new ones too.
One thought Iāve had is Iāve noticed some people seem to forget the new game plus codes so Iāve been thinking that it meant be useful to have the codes mentioned in the completed achievement descripton, for example;
Achieved!
You did this! [NG+ code "Lootbox"]
Would that be helpful to people?
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Yes! Omg please add that, Iām one of those unable to remember the codes. And especially when replaying after long time Iām basically lost when it comes to the codes, so yeah it would be helpful.
Update:
Beta testing of both the new content AND the new Nonbinary protagonst are finished. Iāve spent the weekend revising the achievements (there are now 60 in total and the achievements linked to new game plus codes mention them when youāve unlocked them.)
Now just need to run randomtest a lot to make 100% no bugs then I can submit the update Iāve been working hard on. Hopefully youāll all find it was worth the wait and then I can finally push myself to continue season two.
Thank you all for your patience and your support. and a special thank you to those beta testers and my editor for all doing a fantastic job making the unnaturalverse even more awesome (imo anyway lol)
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Just sent an email to the artist of the new cover so while Iām waiting Iāve tried to do something myself so here is a test. So a few opinons would be helpful. How does this look to youā¦
edit: @defenestratin here was my attempt lol
Edit 2;
@defenestratin will do a better version of this to make it stand out better so the update will be delayed slightly Iāll let you know when it does get submitted.
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While waiting for the new version of the artwork Iām just working on a better description/summary for the game.
So here is what the old version says:
Monsters are real. Join the Supernatural Response Team, an organization formed in direct response to the first documented case showing the existence of the darker side of humanity.
Now for my revised version (along with the bullet points most new hosted games have);
UnNatural is an interactive Urban Fantasy tale where YOU are the protagonist.
Join the Supernatural Response Team, an organization formed in direct response to the tragedy that tore apart your childhood and revealed the monsters in our midst.
Play as male, female or non-binary. Gay, straight, bisexual or aromantic.
Work alongside a team of specialised professionals as you deal with each case.
Encounter various unnatural monsters as you progress from vampires and werewolves to ghosts and gargoyles.
Remember the events of that fateful night and discover what really happened.
Slaughter the monsters or find alternative ways to deal with them.
Embrace or deny your birthright. Choose the Shadows or the Light.
How does that compare to the old version?
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I think the new summary is better! Iād maybe try to make that second paragraph (right before the bullet points) a sentence or so longer, if you can think of another sentence to add that wouldnāt be repetitive, but overall it looks pretty good.
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Thanks. Yeah it does feel like itās missing something Iāll have to brainstorm it a bit more.
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Second attempt at updated summary;
UnNatural is an interactive Urban Horror Novel where YOU are the protagonist.
Join the Supernatural Response Team, an organization formed in direct response to the tragedy that tore apart your childhood and revealed the monsters in our midst. Help them kick ass and save lives.
Play as male, female or non-binary. Gay, straight, bisexual or aromantic.
Work alongside a team of specialised professionals as you deal with each case.
Encounter various unnatural monsters as you progress from vampires and werewolves to ghosts and gargoyles.
Remember the events of that fateful night and discover what really happened.
Slaughter the monsters or find alternative ways to deal with them.
Embrace or deny your birthright. Choose the Shadows or the Light.
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While waiting for the cover I wanted to ask a question. In Episode Six when youāre on the way to the MRU base and get the call off your Uncle, what did you choose?
- Went after my brother.
- Stayed on mission.
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Artwork with the new logo by @defenestratin
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Iāve submitted the updated files to CoG so thanks everyone for your patience.
Iām hopeful itāll prove worth the wait
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ā¦Aaaand looks like it will be on Steam in about 19 hours.
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It looks like itās got the old cover but new content so will have to wait and see. Iām nervous steam is a big deal.
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Mate you earned this this game is one of the best Iāve played and is more than worth the steam title and launch
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Oh cool, so does that mean the app version will be updating soonish?
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