UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

nonbinary-inclusive
science-fiction
gender-choice

#6434

The morality bar would be a great idea, the only question is how it would influence future decisions and if others reacted to your morality bar. Like if people state that you have a darker presence about you, and how it would influence your powers. Like being an angel with dark wings. Or your wings blind all those who view them with the overwhelming flame of justice!


#6435

You could also make use of the save and load system of each chapter features in Tin Star, until date no novel has done it better than that game.


#6436

Also can you describe the characters and sceans with vivid imagery, I am very curious as to how you incision every character, perhaps even a way to set the appearance of the main character at the beginning of the novel would be fun.


#6437

I would love nothing more than to volunteer for beta testing.


#6438

I got to drawing again, and my character from UnNatural was the lucky one who put to the canvas this time. Thanks for helping me stoke the creative fires, @Nocturnal_Stillness!

Edit: I realized that Gyazo links aren’t permanent. Whoopsydaisy. WARNING-- big drawing because I don’t draw small. LOL


#6439

Looks really good! It always intrigues me how people imagine an Azure’s wings :slight_smile:


#6440

Hi all still looking for some nonbinary readers to test the new nonbinary path.


#6441

Update:

The beta testing of the main game and the new nonbinary path has gone well and I’m almost ready to submit the update. I’m just going over the achievements and considering some new ones too.

One thought I’ve had is I’ve noticed some people seem to forget the new game plus codes so I’ve been thinking that it meant be useful to have the codes mentioned in the completed achievement descripton, for example;

Achieved!
You did this! [NG+ code "Lootbox"]

Would that be helpful to people?


#6442

Yes! Omg please add that, I’m one of those unable to remember the codes. And especially when replaying after long time I’m basically lost when it comes to the codes, so yeah it would be helpful.


#6443

Yes, please! That would be very helpful. Usually, when I go to input a code, my phone saves some of the stuff I’ve typed before, but it’s mixed with all these other things (like character names I’ve used or other things I’ve typed while trying to remember certain codes) so I end up really confused on which ones were codes that worked and which were something entirely else.


#6444

Update:

Beta testing of both the new content AND the new Nonbinary protagonst are finished. I’ve spent the weekend revising the achievements (there are now 60 in total and the achievements linked to new game plus codes mention them when you’ve unlocked them.)

Now just need to run randomtest a lot to make 100% no bugs then I can submit the update I’ve been working hard on. Hopefully you’ll all find it was worth the wait and then I can finally push myself to continue season two.

Thank you all for your patience and your support. and a special thank you to those beta testers and my editor for all doing a fantastic job making the unnaturalverse even more awesome (imo anyway lol)


#6445

Just sent an email to the artist of the new cover so while I’m waiting I’ve tried to do something myself so here is a test. So a few opinons would be helpful. How does this look to you…

edit: @defenestratin here was my attempt lol

Edit 2;

@defenestratin will do a better version of this to make it stand out better so the update will be delayed slightly I’ll let you know when it does get submitted.


#6446

While waiting for the new version of the artwork I’m just working on a better description/summary for the game.

So here is what the old version says:

Monsters are real. Join the Supernatural Response Team, an organization formed in direct response to the first documented case showing the existence of the darker side of humanity.

Now for my revised version (along with the bullet points most new hosted games have);

UnNatural is an interactive Urban Fantasy tale where YOU are the protagonist.

Join the Supernatural Response Team, an organization formed in direct response to the tragedy that tore apart your childhood and revealed the monsters in our midst.

  • Play as male, female or non-binary. Gay, straight, bisexual or aromantic.

  • Work alongside a team of specialised professionals as you deal with each case.

  • Encounter various unnatural monsters as you progress from vampires and werewolves to ghosts and gargoyles.

  • Remember the events of that fateful night and discover what really happened.

  • Slaughter the monsters or find alternative ways to deal with them.

  • Embrace or deny your birthright. Choose the Shadows or the Light.

How does that compare to the old version?


#6447

I think the new summary is better! I’d maybe try to make that second paragraph (right before the bullet points) a sentence or so longer, if you can think of another sentence to add that wouldn’t be repetitive, but overall it looks pretty good. :slight_smile:


#6448

Thanks. Yeah it does feel like it’s missing something I’ll have to brainstorm it a bit more.


#6449

Second attempt at updated summary;

UnNatural is an interactive Urban Horror Novel where YOU are the protagonist.

Join the Supernatural Response Team, an organization formed in direct response to the tragedy that tore apart your childhood and revealed the monsters in our midst. Help them kick ass and save lives.

  • Play as male, female or non-binary. Gay, straight, bisexual or aromantic.

  • Work alongside a team of specialised professionals as you deal with each case.

  • Encounter various unnatural monsters as you progress from vampires and werewolves to ghosts and gargoyles.

  • Remember the events of that fateful night and discover what really happened.

  • Slaughter the monsters or find alternative ways to deal with them.

  • Embrace or deny your birthright. Choose the Shadows or the Light.


#6450

While waiting for the cover I wanted to ask a question. In Episode Six when you’re on the way to the MRU base and get the call off your Uncle, what did you choose?

  • Went after my brother.
  • Stayed on mission.

0 voters


#6451

Artwork with the new logo by @defenestratin


#6452

I’ve submitted the updated files to CoG so thanks everyone for your patience.

I’m hopeful it’ll prove worth the wait :slight_smile:


#6453

…Aaaand looks like it will be on Steam in about 19 hours.