UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

Not got any further into the story but have added an option to get to choose Alpha or Beta if you have the right stats.

Also have altered the talk with Ashley after your first job in Alpha (I intend to do this to all of the conversations but want opinions on it before putting the extra effort into the rest)

You can now talk to David if he survives.

Will be working on finishing Episode 2 over the next few days.

As always let me know if you find any errors or any other comments.

link: http://nocturnalstillnesscog.webs.com/Unnatural/my%20game/index.html

Thanks for the update π_π. There is a bug after I shoot to stun, about to talk to my team mates. Also I like how the grandmother hits Jamie as it is not that odd for someone to hit another for doing something stupid.

I just played through again and it is still bugged.

Usagi !_!

@SengokuKronos

What was the error message?

Sorry but, I’m on a kindle fire and 14. I have neither the time nor resources to give the error warning to you. Again sorry, that may have come out wrong. Also I have a little brother with no rhythm playing the drums in the background which is giving me a MASSIVE headache I hope you you understand.

Apologetically Usagi !_!

By the way, which skill level lets you shoot the kid to wound? Because I seem to have only even gotten either 1 or 2 and while I hadn’t been paying that close attention before I know that the last two times I’ve had two and it’s killed him.

There also doesn’t seem to be anything different about the conversation with Ashley

Maybe its my specific choices that makes it happen

Strange 2 should let you wound I’ll have to check the code later.

With Ashley each option should have another set of questions

The story gets better every time I go back and read it. I have two things that did stand out a little for me as I played.

The book Craig gives you. Why under the floorboard, pherhaps he found it in the very back last row top self collecting dust. It just seem finding it under the floorboard has been done to death. The best hidding spot is in plain sight. Of course that is just me. Craig does not seem the type to hang in a library, perhaps you can have the player discover it while doing research.

Seond is when I am in the hospitial after killing the man and making my escape. You say it was cleared out by a bomb threat. Where did this come from, I was asleep then attacked but I don’t remember any bomb threats being anounce. Plus I would be suing the hospitial as they left me behind. Again just my way of thinking.

Keep up the great writing.

It seems that non-existent variable /‘not/’" causes it

@Lordirish

glad you’re enjoying it. the bomb threat scene will need tweaking as you’ve pointed out. also I’ll look into having the book found another way.

@SengokuKronos

strange I never got an error on mine. Will double check tonight.

I’ve fixed the shoot to kill/wound scene so having a firearms greater than 1 should give you the option.

Also double checked the bug but can’t find it. reuploaded the files and hopefully it’ll be fixed as it doesn’t appear when I test it.

It still shows up so I am going to highlight my choices
Let’s just play!
Check downstairs…
Name
Read each question thoroughly and answer them.
I’m sitting with the other boys…
Stand and fight…
“We had a mock test I think I did well.”
…my family was killed by a vampire.
I will learn how to defend myself, Craig won’t pick on me anymore!
…yeah, I am learning a mixture of offensive and defensive moves.
Use my skill to exploit Gabriel’s weak stance.
I didn’t train to beat Craig, I’ll just talk to him.
I can help maybe he will leave me alone then.
Exams are important, I don’t mind missing the party.

Let’s do this…
Yeah, I’m going to play sports with my friends.
“Can’t go wrong with John Stuart Mill, consequentialism always seemed more pragmatic in regards to morality.”
I want to learn about them all.
…I want to become friends again.
They shouldn’t of killed the monster, it should have gone to jail.
“Sure I can try.”
A spell?Let’s see if it works!
Unit Alpha
Unit Alpha
“I’m Loki nice to meet you.”
…which you slip into the underarm holster.
Listen…
Shoot the kid
Aim to wound
And that’s where the bug shows up.

@SengokuKronos

Well this is strange I just picked those options and the error didn’t show up.

Does anyone else get an error then?

Maybe its my name? Loki Æsir

@SengokuKronos

Could be, try putting the name as Loki Aesir or try a different name.

@everyone

update on the progress of the next update.

Improved the nightmare sequence in Episode two currently working on a revision hospital scene that will take the game past the using of your powers.

just a question how are Ren’s descriptions of the different powers working are you getting the basic gist of what each power does?

I would like a little more detail on the powers but if your to lazy its fine anyway.

The power descriptions seem fine, though I hope that the implication that you can do more with form than impale people through the heart is true.

Changed the name still comes up

@Shoelip

form is the ability to create things out of shade. the blade is one of the easiest shapes to form I intend to have the chance to create a copy of a key to unlock a door also a scene where you create a wall to stop a monster/monsters also considering other options too.

@SengokuKronos

I honestly don’t know what to suggest it works fine for me and the files online are the latest ones. have you tried refreshing your browser?