Ultimata (Fantasy WIP)

Hmm, maybe I could try turn some of them into some kind of minor side characters. Though, for now I probably won’t pick any of them for the main story. Maybe in the second book.


You don’t have to apologize. I really liked your character profile and found it very well written. It was obvious that you put quite a bit effort into it and I really appreciate that, so you don’t really have to feel sorry.

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any plans for adding more races?

Not really, since I have already quite a bit on my plate with the already available races. But who knows, maybe somewhere in the future I might add new playable races to my story. If you might have a suggestion for a race you would like to play as, you can always share it here. As I said, maybe I would actually include it one day.

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very well,thanks for replying
what about a fairy race? in any case,I am looking foward to the when the it is finished

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quite a bit is an understatement giving that it’s not only the abilities that are different

Its not that bad, really. I mean, the main story is still almost exactly the same for all the races as are a majority of the decisions and choices.

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List of races:
Nephilim
Demigod
Genesis(half archangel and half archdemon, for the extra power)

Please don’t take this the wrong way, but I would rather not include that particular race in my story. I’m not really a big fan of angelic races like Nephilim and it would probably be more of a struggle if I had to write scenes for a race like this. Also, I think this entire Nephilim thing is quite stale at this point since you see them in so many different stories. So I’m really sorry but no, I won’t include Nephilim as a playable race for my story.

I will be honest, I don’t think this race would be really matching for the MC (mainly due to their familial background with a strong focus on their father)

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A suggested race…
A horsemen of the apocalypse.

Umm, I don’t think that counts as a race

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Could you have a face of demons that suck blood to get their power??

Ya have a descendant of death, one of the original horsemen. (Reaper women can’t remember her name).
A descendant of another horsemen wouldn’t be outta order.

That might be true, but my version of death isn’t one of the four horseman. Instead she is the living personification of life and death, of recovery and decay. The most powerful and oldest being in existence who exists since the birth of our universe.

Whose name?

Sophia

Fair enough I wont push the idea just a suggestion thou I wish ya the best on the story.

Maybe a machine/android race, you could be something like 2B from NieR Automata.

Or an aquatic race like the Siren.
You’d be able to sing and use music to charm others and completely dominate their mind if you’re powerful enough. You’d also have an affinity to water magic

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Ah, finally something promising.

Nice idea but still something that wouldn’t fit the story concept I envisioned for the playable races. Especially since such races are build and not born, which would make the role of the MCs mother pointless. So sorry, but no.


That is a really good idea. I’m still missing a race that would represent the element water and I’ve been looking for something to fill the gap, so that would definitely be a promising candidate

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Aren’t sirens a bit like succubus/inccubus? Both charm their prey into submission. Or is it otherwise in your story

Well, there is a difference between these two. You see Succubi and Incubi use their pheromones to charm their prey, while Sirens use their beautiful voice. So, while its true that they both charm their victims into submission, they do so in rather different ways.

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Ahem, a suggestion. Ever consider something like a child of chutulu. Or a tentacle monster muehehehe you better run chris I’m coming for you. Even better a slime or dwarf (so I can make any weapons I want Lol.(

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