Glad you like the idea, lol. Don’t mention it! Also, I found an error. When speaking with Matrev for the first time, if you choose “Is that any way to greet a superior?”, you get line 466: It is illegal to fall out of a *choice statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.
@Lola098 I see that. I’m tweaking it now, but I’m not quite sure what’s going on there. I’ll let you know when I get it squared away
EDIT: Actually, I found it! Should be good to go now! Thank you!
Great game beautifully written carnt wait for more
Thanks! I’m super busy with a contract right now, but when that ends at the end of the month, I’ll finish up the prologue.
Great carnt wait
Can’t wait for more, you definitely got me hooked from the start.
Wow this is really good, this is defiantly going on my watch list. Good luck on the story.
I love this game! It’s well crafted and military is more of my style when it comes to games. Is it bad to say that I want more too soon? Good luck, @Lithium! Will happily wait for more! 
Well played, @Lithium. You caught me off guard you sly devil
Great game all the same @Lithium. Keep up the good work!
Good start, looking forward for when you are able to continue
Love the game really great but I found an error when you play as the ground so older and select your skills if you choose heavy weapons when it asks you if the choices you made are correct it says error-for heavy weapon this might not affect the long time but just bringing it up
Great game, as a pilot can we name our ship? (would be great 
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Love the game so far. The writing is interesting, and I really want to know why I’m being court martialed! Is it because I’m just too attractive? Probably.
I went along the intelligence path and got no errors so far and didn’t even notice any major typos or misspellings so keep up the good work!
@SpaceLesbian lol, i was thinking the same =)) But i probably poison some intel superior officer to get promoted ,that would be a bad ass reason being guilty and deserve being court martial . I play evil characters so i would probably being guilty of something.
Wow! Thanks for all the comments everybody. I just started again, so I’m hoping *fingers crossed* that I’ll have more for you at the end of the month.
@BrandonbigK Thanks! I’ll check it out and see where the problem is.
I’ve been gone for a while, so it was nice to find this up on my return. However(dun dun dun), when I was playing through as a Ground Soldier(which I think would read better as Trooper or Marine), I got a fair way through until just after the bombing of Rana. Then it said that I would have to be strong for my pilots. And then it started talking about how I was no stranger to the cockpit of a Wayfarer.
I’m confused. I thought I was an infantryman.
Great story so far! Did find an error at the ceremony when picking a male pilot route:
“It is with great pride that I award this special war-time promotion to Captain Malik Alcander Yidrath and name her as Commanding Officer of the newly formed 214th Wing of the Delphen Space Corps. Congratulations.”
Wrong gender referenced there, my character was male.
Hmm this has a great start along with a very personal drive for the PC. I wonder how nasty the war crimes we can commit will be. For the trooper and pilot options it seemed as though we would not be taking to the field. Also I assume that we would have the oppertunitues to get a nickname for our selfs and the men under our command?