I picked joker then sarcastic
I fixed the bug, but it may not immediately take effect. I tried it a second ago and it hadn’t uploaded yet.
this time I get chap1-1 line 128 error non existent variable ‘saintly’
I really do recommend using quick test. It will find these for you so we don’t have to complain about them. You’re going to scare off potential readers if you don’t at least make sure your game runs all the way through…
All you need tio do is go two layers up from where you edit your scene files. If you edit scene files in: C:\Users\Administrator\Desktop\dfabulich-choicescript-a2897f3\ChoiceScript\web\mygame
Go to C:\Users\Administrator\Desktop\dfabulich-choicescript-a2897f3\ChoiceScript. The place where you hit compile.html. Hit quicktest.html instead, and it should automatically find these kinds of errors for you.
Seriously, just run quicktest before running compile.
There’s a variable error that keeps appearing after the part where you accept the to purchase the ship.
So I guess the demo ends right after getting the boat. Or is that an error?
Also if there are 2 protagonists does that mean I can romance my self? 8D
Hard to know whether after getting the boat the demo ends or not since it keeps popping out a stupid non-variable, my moneys on it being an error.
@Bloodhawkereaper, @Blackbeard: It’s an error, I just haven’t had the opportunity to fix it yet.
Sorry about that.
@Bloodhawkereaper: I’m not sure what I’m doing with romance quite yet
Yes and thats why I love it 
New update! Nothing really new, but I got rid of the bugs that stop you from reaching what I had completed, so like 2 extra pages. Maybe. I did stitch together a little art at the beginning (when it says it’s a wip). Tell me what you think of it considering it was on a tight budget of $0.00
The art looks promising, it could use some polishing but the overall design looks nice.
“grandpa, I don’t think you know what you’re talking about” - there’s grammar errors here. “Grandpa, I don’t think you know what you’re talking about.” is better. If you like, I’ll go over all the files you have and fix up the grammar for you.
The phrase “maximal pain” doesn’t make sense. It could be changed to “intense pain” or “a sharp jolt of pain”.
Other than that, glad you’re still working on it.
I thik he called
still stnds now
bout starnge creatures
You and your grandfather were part of an estanged community… This paragraph could use some breaking up, it runs on a bit despite the fact it’s interesting : )
however ,being the narrator
Scotish = Scottish?
“You know exactly why we’re here, and you know it.” He continues.
Sailer = Sailor?
one hundred fifty scraps = one hundred and fifty.
you startd to talk.
sun up = sun-up? Not 100% sure on that one.
Despite a few typos this was fun to read, hope you keep going!