Sorry, I’m just used to the thought that talking about personal plans on the internet is met with a resounding “meh.”
Anyways, onto your comments.
Yeah, I’ve been considering how I could shorten that out a bit, I don’t really like how long that portion turned out to be either. I’ll try to get that fixed at some point.
That’s actually a really good point that I didn’t think of. Generally speaking, I’m the kind of person that usually uses the two terms interchangeably, so I didn’t really think about it too much.when I was writing. That was my mistake.
That’s not a bad idea either, but I don’t know how a scan would reveal the MC’s name when they weren’t even on the database to begin with. Still, it’s an idea to consider.
Thanks for the comments!
Addendum: I’ll probably see what I can do about fixing the gender scene sometime tonight, since it’s smaller and easier to deal with. That’s priority 1 at the moment.