So excited for this! Good luck with the rewrites and I’m definitely making time to play this 
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good luck
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You’re so right about the flower, I couldn’t brush him off after I got it
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Excellent demo, I liked it more than the original version, I hope you continue to take into account the player’s stats and decisions. To give room for both the replayability and the freedom within the plot.
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Yay they were my favorites in the original
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We are so back 
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Is astryn still a route??
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Oh wow a rewrite
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It does smell, most noticeably of ammonia. It is small, and dries quickly; but that does not make it odourless. I’ve kept cage birds and chickens and been pooped on by both my domestic and wild birds. It does smell, and Richard was right next to her so, if he’s sensitive to smells he may have got as good a whiff as she did. Most of his reaction was likely teasing, however.
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According to beChewy they dont.
Same with northoernparrot.
The only time a bird’s poop should smell is if there is an infection of some sort or another health problem.
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Will these changes apply to the previous official release once finished?
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Welcome back!!
What an upgrade this is! I love it!! Though I did like the original one, too. So glad to see Lena is still an RO, just thought she wouldn’t be for some reason.
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There are repeated scenes in the story. When the bird’s feces falls on Atheris’ head and we go to help, there is a repeated paragraph.
Hope this helps, I don’t know how to send a screenshot.
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Glad to see you back and well! Havent finished reading the new demo yet, but I’m loving it so far, all the charm of the original and yet more engaging!
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im honestly surprised at how less of a cold hearted jerk the king is now, i thought being king meant you had to be one
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Mc beating the hell out of Richard is my favourite moment
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Please tell me someone is proofreading this you missed some words every now and then, and when I picked the “Your Grace” option MC still thought it was sir Arnold
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the what? a remake of a released game?
I don’t quite follow, what was the reason again? as far as I remembered it was quite a success
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loved it
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As a half brother I care about my siblings but right now I am very pissed off at a certain half-brother who try to challenge his younger brother to a duel as the oldest that was the most disrespectful thing to do I just feel like he’s trying to prove a point but it’s not getting proven it just showing that he just wants attention and it’s getting the opposite reflect to me he got my respect involving helping the civilians but dueling your younger sibling just to prove a fucking point it just makes my blood boil I’m a stepbrother and a half brother I have my standards but fuck me I didn’t want to duel him because I want to be respectful but right now I want to punch him in the face?!
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