I’ve been working on this game for some time, and although it’s not the principal one I was planing to do, I would like to see what you guys think about it.
The writing it’s very simple, I am not a native English speaker and in my language I am used to have a million different words to refer to the same thing, as well as descriptions. So because of it, it may seem a litlle “childish”.
You are the princess of the Ohnos Kingdom and was born with magic, a very unusual thing in the world of Zera. From your eyes, you can heal people. Now you will announce for all the world what you can do, and live with the threat of the remainings of a previous war, and a unexpected betrayal.
Other things to know:
- Gender locked
- 2 Romance options
- 334k in this sort of demo
- I didn’t add many features (i.e. last name, gender swap) because of my poor knowledge of coding, and I also plan do to some things later on.
You should be able to get to the talk with your mother. Please point errors found, as well as grammatical mistakes, there should be a lot of them.