This just made me laugh so hard!! 
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This may sound stupid but because it just felt right. I’m writing with the flow so these things are gonna happen.
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That’s cool. It’s just something that made me go “Wait, what?” when I read it.
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Yeah. Hopefully there’ll be less of those moments
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Why?? Those moments made me laugh.
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Will there be a possibility of us teaming up with Puppeteer or are we locked into having to side against him?
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Presumably because living things tend to have genitals.
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They also tend to have faces 
. The way it was written made it seem like the MC was more surprised at the lack of genitals than the lack of a face. It just tickled my funny bone is all.
Hopefully you’ll continue this story, and flesh out the MC’s background a bit more. Maybe the Puppeteer is a significant part of that background?
That would be interesting but no. If I decide to make this a series then maybe.
He does.
Thank you. Will be fixed in the next update.
Looks interesting, but one question when you go to the warehouse with Tevin he says “ladies first” the mc’s gender hasn’t been selected yet. To me it seems slightly out of order, maybe when you see the pictures Walsh shows you, you get to select a basic idea of what the mc looks like including the gender. Good luck I am looking forward to more,you have got me hooked.
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Oh, I’ll see what I can tweak. Thanks.
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