I really didn’t expect to like this as much as your main project because it’s really good put simply(and this is a side project) but honestly, I think I might even like this more with a little more content. Also is this based off of Arthurian legends? Because the names Merlin and Eskanore are from Arthurian legends if I am correct (I also like Arthurian legends)… Sorry for the lack of actual bug reports, haven’t found any yet…
So far so good, seems to have a lot of potential, I dunno if you plan to give the MC magic abilities, but if not, maybe you can insert other skills, the basic ones, strength, agility, etc.
Anyway, you do you and best of luck with your work.
If you weren’t drunk then it’s probably awful… the only time your writing is good is when your chugging some vodka… okay to be 100% honest… I didn’t even try it yet, but because of the fact that your other game was good because of the fact you were drunk… well I can only imagine that if you were sober when you came up with this idea it won’t be as good as your other game… just my opinion of course.
It’s short so there’s not much to comment on, but I liked it and see potential!
I’d recommend writing more about the places the story’s happening, tho. I had no idea where the MC was, only that there was a forest and then a tavern.
Well, good luck with your wip!