The Girl of Time [WIP]

I really suck at this no matter what I do I get the bad end ;-;
somebody help me please lol

And this game needs a save system,itā€™s like an rpg game,like Final fantasy,if it going to be long it would nice.

@InfiniteDreamer
Thanks for playing the game! I am currently in the process of implementing the save system. Typhoon Glenda hit us very hard, so I was out for like a week. And in General Marthā€™s fight, Armor Knights has really strong defense, but weak resistance. Try using Castor as your Fighter and someone with a heal (Jasmine or the MC) as support. I will try to lower his speed and luck so that he couldnā€™t dodge easily.

You donā€™t know what craft means? Well in this case either ā€œskill in planning, making, or executing,ā€ combine the two words and the meaning would be ā€œskill in making or using oneā€™s weapon,ā€ see?

Hmm, I guess that explains why I canā€™t play the game, I get a gamebreaking error after choosing my chraracter, Sandstorm.

Oh and Sandstorm, why does the fight system assume that only one character can act at a time in the fight? Weā€™re fighting a guy two on one, both of us ought to be able to get an action in for about everyone one of his, unless heā€™s just that freaking fast.

@stsword I was inspired by Narutoā€™s xbox game where thereā€™s one fighter and the other characters can fight in a fixed time after filling the gaugeā€¦ But Iā€™ll try to redo the battle system.

UPDATE!

-Redid the Battle System
-Implemented the Save System

Well defeated the general but lost to Raven so I got the bad ending, oh well, maybe Iā€™ll try a bowman next time.

I really like it! I think that itā€™s well done and that the story is really interesting. I also feel like you could somehow connect this with your other story ā€œNakamaā€ and maybe even ā€œOutbreakā€ if you really wanted to lol. But yeah, I like it. I hope you keep adding more to it. :slight_smile:

Good job on this game. I was really enjoyable. I liked the character interaction here more than outbreak. Granted the tone here is lighter so that helped. Also Iā€™m probably thinking too deep on this, but why didnā€™t everyone fight against the general? Cause all of the generals lackeys are out cold, and during the fight the only way I could win was spamming boulder crush. Granted the fight would be way too easy if everyone fought.
About what @ChaoticGamer said you could definitely connect your other games with this one. Short easter eggs where you open up a portal, and end up in the other games. :stuck_out_tongue:

Hi!
Iā€™m new here, and your story was on my list to leave a comment. Iā€™ve been following for some time and I will like to say I loved it :slight_smile:
I liked the characters very much, and the part when appears the MCā€™s sister itā€™s very touching.
One thing I noticed is that before an update, when Raven appeared on the Little Girlā€™s house, my feminine MC thought or said something about him; his appearance if I am not mistaken. I didnā€™t notice that anymore, I had enjoyed that. o///O
I liked Carver too, but I think I will go more for Raven (so, Lucy, please stay out of my way lol). Also liked the idea you mentioned of helping the others to engage a romance.
Eagerly waiting for more. Oh, and before I forget, sorry for my bad English writing, I understand much better than I write lol

Love the Attack on titan reference.

Coincidentally, Judiel from the ā€œOutbreakā€ was set to become a recruitable character here.

Iā€™m currently knee-deep in thoughts about how I should write the next chapter. Itā€™s about Girly Castor and his past. This is also the part where the little girl gets a weapon (Bow).

@Xhandas_Antonidas After much much deliberation, I have decided to make Raven an available RO for guys too. :))

@Sandstorm well Lucy is going to have a field day. Wait Judiel was :open_mouth: ? If he is what caused him to leave the group from ā€œOutbreakā€?

@Sandstorm
Glad to hear you are ok after Typhoon Glenda!
So, Iā€™ve got some editing done for you of things I noticied that could be improved on grammar wise. Do you want me to send the info via this forumā€™s private messaging? Or do you want to give me your email address? Just let me know and this week I will send you what I have so far. :smiley:

@ninja6398 What I had in mind waa Judiel getting sucked in by a vortex made by a super typhoon (Kinda like Gullivers). But Iā€™m still not sure.

@piggleywinks Iā€™ll send you my email address. Thank you for the help!

@Sandstorm well if you do decide to. How are you going to put Judiel missing in the ā€œOutbreakā€ if you decide to go back to the story?

@ninja6398 Thatā€™s probably the reason why Iā€™m still not sure if Iā€™ll put him here. Uhm, actually, whenever Iā€™m not writing TGOT, Iā€™m revising the Outbreak, like total revision.

UPDATE Added a bit of chapter. just a bit. Midterms are coming up, so Iā€™m banned from writing anything other than reviewers and notes. I have to pass that freaking Statistics class no matter what!

@Sandstorm Outbreak story is getting revise whew, I really liked that story. For a while I thought you gave up on it. Glad to see thatā€™s not the case.

Good luck on Midterms.

I really liked the game, the update was short but very enjoyable. And I loved Raven :x

I sort of have an attachment to aya :frowning: tell me we can get back to herr!