@Sandstorm Did Typhoon Neoguri affect you there in the Philippines?
Thanks for sharing your game! It is a Compelling concept and I enjoyed it. Pulls at my heartstrings since I have a “little sister” IRL. I remember you saying in other threads that English is not your first language so I wanted to praise you for your writing! Right now, I’m focusing on the story and any coding issues instead of grammatical stuff. But I am happy to do grammatical editing for you if you need/want.
Items for your review:
~ After searching church, I Tried to visit lake and got this error: “aria line 3075 bad label lake”
~ Kept blocking Raven’s attacks but then got this error: “aria line 1155 invalid expression at char 91, expected no more tokens, found: CLOSE_PARENTHESIS [)]”
~ Little girl saved me with her time dome and she was talking about not wanting to be alone anymore. When I clicked on Next to move on I got this error: aria line 3428 non existent command ‘gosub_exp’
@Piggleywinks I don’t think it passed through here, but there’s the occasional rain though…
-I’m very happy that you enjoyed my game :)) And I’m extremely grateful if you’ll edit my grammatical mistakes. I’m still tracing the errors you found though.
UPDATE!
-Chapter one is now complete! Right now I’m checking if there are still errors…
Chapter Two is where the story splits into two; One route will be about the Elves and the other about the Undines. 3 characters appear in each. On the elf route is an Elf (Of course!), a Cavalry, and Jasmine (If you didn’t meet her in chapter one). On the Undine route is an Undine (obviously), a Beast Tamer, and a pestering kid. I’ll be writing the elf route while Riu29 is in charge of the Undine route.
There are chapters in here I didn’t notice and really good so I got the bad ending and did your other WIP you finished right the Outbreak one? And is this the end of this WIP I really don’t think it’s finished yet
Tips to get the Good end:
-If you don’t want to look for the Little Girl’s name, recruit Jasmine.
-Compliment her.
-Win against Raven (It’s easier now).
-Meet Lucy.
I’m still editing the endings, especially the requirements, since I do think It’s hard to get…
Ah forgot to ask this… Can everyone help me? Chapter 2 is the part where the MC finally gets a job, but I have no idea what they should be. I don’t want to use mainstream jobs (Swordsman etc) but I might have to :-S I already have jobs for the Long-range weapons; Bow-users can be Hunters or Archers, while Stave-users can be Shamans, Mages, or Clerics(If you have the Heal skill). Priest job is unavailable. Right now, I don’t have any idea what the Frontal-type should be XD
What to expect in Chapter TWO
Rock, paper, Scissor Tournament XD
Arena
Skills Shop
Three Side Quest (Where Jasmine is a necessity in one)
Well I’ve done it with Raven spamming gravity kicks or whatever they’re called and myself playing support from the air legion, in which I practiced my weaponcraft.
It seems to be luck based mission though.
Hmm, I got a game ending error fighting the general as a water user supporting Raven, I thought I’d beat him through attrition thanks to healing spells.
I don’t think Gravity kick did anything for me.Is it like Ravens fight where you have to make the right choices and last a certain amount of turns?And I don’t know what you’re talking about when you refer to weapon craft.I think that the GM should make the Marth fight a lot less luck based and shouldn’t do luck based boss fights EVER.Something is wrong when the deciding factor on whether or not I win or lose is when the Gods decide to have mercy on me rather than through skill.
