This is my nearly-finished near-future scifi story, THE FLOATING CITY. You play a teenager (choice of 3 genders and 2 romantic options; one male and one female) who needs to decide a career direction. Your parents own a shark farm, and assume you’ll be employed there. Your best friend Kassandra has a secret that will change not just your city, but several cities near you.
It’s (VERY roughly) 100,000 words.
I’ll most likely write the post-climax chapter this month (or next month :P). It’s mainly about recovery from the climax, and choosing the PC’s career path based on the abilities/reputation/connections they’ve built up throughout the game. I’m very interested in comments about where the story feels like it should go, or if there is anything that feels like it’s missing or makes no sense. I’m also very much interested in any errors I might have made regarding sensitivity with race/disabilities.
I’m also interested in which bits or aspects of the game ARE working.
Thank you so much!
To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/play/Felicity_Banks/the-floating-city/mygame/
Edit: This version definitely doesn’t have that killer Chapter 11 error. https://dashingdon.com/play/Felicity_Banks/the-floating-city-again/mygame/