Thank you, I’ll keep that in mind! 
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Heyy again.
The writing progress is slow atm. Chapter two is such a pain to write, and things have gotten dragged out (sorry)! 
I have, however, uploaded the first chapter to dashington. Yay! (Not public tho) And I’m currently mapping out the events of chapter three and onward to ch.8-ish.
Also, I updated the first post a 'lil bit! 
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Finally put the link up, so you can play the demo! In the next update the goal is to introduce all the RO’s listed in the first post, as well as some much needed lore! 
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Umm I’m confused about the stats they make no sense I suggest putting a guide
Thanks, I’ll make sure to do that! I’ll put it up here though, since I have no access to my files atm. 
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Ay, I forgot that this was still happening! I’m glad you’re back and I can’t wait to see what the demo has in store!
Combine intellect and lore and Pacific and lure
Because there basically the same thing
Handy makes more sense as crafting
Persistence to resolve
This is just a suggestion your the author and untimialty know best
@L0G1C Thanks!! I rewrote it though, so it’s a lot different from how it was originally written! 
@Blank I mostly agree with you- although I’ll look over my notes on the stats and see if I missed anything in my description. And I’ll probably keep the terms, because I like them the way they are!
Based on what the demo shows, the story seems to be progressing nicely. It has potential to become great if you continue to work on it! Morrigan also seems like an interesting mysterious character, can’t wait to see more of them. 
Anyways good job! I’ve also found some little minor typos:
Should be prompt.
Should be cue instead of que.
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OMG! I love it so far!!! This is really exciting!
What are your plans for Morrigan? Like she just the vanishing/reappearing mentor or she gonna be a friend…and…possibly a RO? (I may have a crush on her. tbh)
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@Foxboi Thanks for the feedback! I’ll fix the errs as soon as I can ( don’t have my computer atm ; _ ; ). I hope this can progress somewhat quickly, but then again I am a slow writer. (’:
Tbh Morrigan is one of my favorites, I’m so pleased with them as a character!
@Alorix Hey, thanks! I suppose you didn’t check the RO list in my first post? 
'Cause Morrigan can be both a mentor and RO 
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I did 't see it no! And YYYAAAAAAYYY!!! But does she stay in her wolf form?
I very much enjoy this story so far I hope to see more from it
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@Alorix I advise you to read up a bit about the mythology surrounding “The Morrigan”, because I based the character a lot upon that.
…sorry, but no spoilers
@AttackOnToaster Thank you! I hope I’ll manage to update this fairly regularly
Okay, so I’ve changed the stats in the main post as they’ll appear in the next update. Chapter three and four are coming along nicely, but I have one question to ask you people, and that’s how you’d prefer I go about introducing the RO’s.
- Allow one option in the game, where the MC may meet one of the RO’s (aside from Morrigan)
- Have multiple options to meet all RO’s in one playthrough.
- Make the game have a set course (no choices) that lets you meet all the RO’s.
- Other (comment please!)
0 voters
Edit: So, the results are pretty clear. I’ll make a set route that allows you to meet the RO’s. It won’t take too long, I think. The first “encounter” is already being worked on. 
Progress update!
This thing is just ballooning. The wordcount has doubled, and I’m not even done writing the encounter with the second RO yet (perhaps I’m adding too many choices in this game). With that said, it’s super fun to see this game evolve, and the world just expanding.
I’m also trying to make some kind of logo, with the amazing art that is pixels. We’ll see how it goes… 
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Let’s have another poll! 'Cause I made some pixel art. Noting too fancy, but I thought it might fit the game, icon-wise. The key word being might, here.
- First.
- Second.
- Neither/Other [Comment please!]
0 voters
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The WIP is now above 13,000 words! Huzzah, I’ve never actually written something this long in english.
Also I had to rewrite some of the previous things just because they didn’t make sense for the MC to know. So there’s that.
Three RO’s are down, so just two more to go, I believe. Additional ones may follow later.
I’m contemplating whenever I should take away the “craftiness” ability and have it under the “knowledge” one intead, just because I feel like it doesn’t get as much gametime as the other ones. That, and the fact I don’t feel as invested in writing it as the other ones. 
It’ll still take a while before the next update, but I’ve gotten the majority of it done.
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