Looking for beta testers for a post-apocalyptic interactive novel - blah blah, you all know the drill.
I’d ideally like two types of feedback: little stuff like typos, misgenderings, and grammatical errors; and big stuff like plot holes character inconsistencies, or major glitches (ie a character returns from the dead)
I’m also interested in social issues that I may have mishandled, such as a gender neutral character being treated in a respectful way, as far as the writing goes.
Hope I did this right? If not let me know please.
Edit 1: due to popular demand, dashingdon link - https://dashingdon.com/go/1822
Edit 2: A summary - The world has ended in atomic flame. You are a lone warrior on your way to the mythic Crescent City - a center of civilization and even democracy and the degenerate wasteland. But to get there, you must first barter for the right to cross the Bridge. Will you collapse under the weight of mutant beasts and conniving wastelanders? Or will you prove your mettle and fulfill your mission? Be prepared for tribals, mutant gators, possible furries, and giant enemy crabs.