To you who despair, who wander in this life like a sad soul, beware of stormy nights! Beware of shipwreckers, these coastal scavengers who spy on you, mislead you and attract you to better carry you away into an abyss of oblivion. Don’t be fooled by their bad trick. Beware of their mocking laughter, stay home and pray!
Hi guys. Another wip of mine this one will be the second projects. I will work on both projects as much as i can. Enjoy!
What am i looking for?
"Low-level"typos and continuity errors. A continuity error is when a character’s gender flips, or someone comes back from the dead, or you run into a plotline that just doesn’t make sense. For these low-level issues, screenshots are very helpful. If you see a problem, take a screenshot.
“Mid-level” things like grammar, word choice, or the use of commas.
“High level” things like plot, pacing, and characters. “Scene A didn’t work for me because x, y, and z,” is useful feedback. “B character was entirely unsympathetic, because u, w, and v,” is also useful feedback.
As of now, the demo consist of the prologue and part of the first chapter.
Word count: Around 22000 including codes
Finished chapter and added the beginning of chapter 2.
Word count: Around 44000 words including codes
Finished chapter 2 and added the beginning of chapter 3
Work count: Around 54k words including codes.