You are the man and a great asset to the land of Supra Humanum. I grant you the title of Chief Science Officer and lead support for my personal mercenary group. 
Wait, so youāre telling that we can die in this demo? Oh god, Iām ready to make mistakes.
I estimate the 4th chapter will contain the next batch of missions. Chances of death will go up then. Should I feel sadistic, I will find a way to make it happen earier. 
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Some typos.
Itās actually like a veeerryyy minor typos (compared to the verbosity 
) but I think itāll be a worthwhile to fix it?
My OCD is triggered every time thereāre missing commas or double-vowels (and stuffs alike)
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I believe in this case, āmenā is more suited than āman.ā
And also, youāre missing a comma on āMars, Luna and Europa.ā
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Another man.
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For Doveās musical tone, I think a tilde ā~ā is better than āi-ā
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This time, I think itās not men/man. It should be human?
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Just as the pic says.
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Now here we are our first fictional machine!
I think the machineās name deserve a capitalization, tho
And thus the typo report is ended.
Oh, love me another sci-fi story 
My brain is picturing my MC as wearing a cargo trouser with Samās blue-gray light-ceramic-armor from Ghost Recon 
BTW, will you try to incorporate CJWās in-game saving plug-in (mod)?
Itās really easy to do it for the dashingdon version, unless you want to put in on your local PC version as well
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Taken from: Man Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
a (1) : an individual human; especially : an adult male human (2) : a man belonging to a particular category (as by birth, residence, membership, or occupation) āusually used in combination councilman (3) : husband I now pronounce you man and wife. (4) : lover He was her man.
b : the human race : humankind the history of man
Some (if not all) of those mentions of āmanā is a reference to humanity as a whole. If it is causing confusion, I could use some synonyms for variety but I donāt think Iāll totally be rid of them.
Good catch on the comma. Fixed that one. Iāve never encountered the tilde use, where did you learn that rule?
Wife caught #5 but I havenāt updated the file yet. Good job though.
#6 - Itās not a specific object. If it was like: Raptorās rapturous air purifier, that would warrant a capital. However I wouldnāt capitalize something like āair purifier.ā Someone can correct me if Iām wrong.
#7 - Fixed, thanks!
Whew, thanks for keeping me on the straight and narrow.
Will you accept black and gray for now? The armor colors will change depending on the mission locale.
That is a āquality of lifeā update that I do intend to make at some point. I think right now my goal is to get the content for chapter 1 complete. Then Iāll take a break to work on stat page and some of the utility of the game before I proceed to chapter 2.
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Actually, all you need to do is to put
*sm_init [random text (preferrably the WIP's title)] | 3
on your startup.txt (preferrably below the *create list)
And check the 
āUse CJWās smPluginMenuAddon?ā under āedit game detailsā on dashingdon.com
Well, as long as itās blackā¦
Actually, I donāt even care if I have to use my pajamas while doing hi-tech stuff on an assassination mission 
About men/man/human thingy, Iām actually not a native English myself, so I canāt really say much about that 
I just simply did a quick, simple google search and I thought it was the norm if āmanā = 1 
while āmenā = a group
Sorry if I sounded like a smartass 
And about the oxygen scrubber, I actually wanted to emphasize the idea that āoxygen scrubber is a future-tech.ā
With current writing, I thought that āoxygen scrubberā and āa large metal cubeā is 2 different things 
Maybe, put an adverb clause on that sentence?
About the tilde, itās actually just my writing rule. Thereās no actual rulebook that mentioned the use of tilde like what Iāve mentioned
Thatās all there is to it? Well thenā¦
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If you use quicktest, you must remove the save code or it will be detected as an error.
Well, that is good to know. Thank you.
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huweeheehee
Quicktest is for weaklings. True coder will play all possible paths manually 
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But then the players would have errors. Canāt let them feeling unsatisfied. 
But what if the story is 100k above words?
Summary
Iāll just leave that here. Iāll also give you a conundrum: Would you rather I give you new content or play with my game with that same period of time?
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How dare you quoted the same quotes on two different posts!
Lord Coder isnāt happy with your doings.
(Actually, yep. Manual testing is what I do exactly on my WIP. Weāll see if I reached that 100k milestone)
Ummā¦ 
Iām not sure if I understand that phrase, sir.
It is the concept of opportunity cost. I can spend my time debugging or I can spend my time writing my upcoming fight scene. I canāt do both simultaneously.
Ah. I can see what you mean, now.
The demo is pretty short as is, and I havenāt witnessed any game breaking bugs so far. Iād like to vote for the fight scene, please. 
As long as the bugs dont break the game, i vote you spend time on the fight scene
You know Iām gonna say fix the non existent game breaking bugs, because thatās the exact OPPOSITE of what other people want
The programmer in me demands that I do a LOT of testing before I send a product out. So, I did a lot of troubleshooting before I let it go.
I know itās short, I just wanted to whet your appetites. I intend to take you to the end of the chapter (however long that takes me) for the next update.
Dear Lord, Iām sounding like George R.R. Martinā¦
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