Stepchild (prototype opening)


#1

This is the experimental prototype opening of a long-neglected mad fantasy epic that’s been rattling in my head for years. It was an experiment with the IDE and to test how I do using ChoiceScript. I’m considering whether this will work better in Inform or CS.

http://bit.ly/1nq9DIL


#2

Pretty funny so far. If anyone else is reading this comment, I strongly recommend that you give the game a try.


#3

Ok ok I love this already it was so god damn funny not that many games get good with the jokes in this lol


#4

Obsolutely hilarious, and the prologue’s not even done yet lol


#5

O yes, humour! We need more CoGs with humour. :smiley:

I think it works well in CS so far but I have naturally no idea where you intend to take it.


#6

This is funny.
Random
And the plot is more incoherent than a drunk with a heavy accent.
(if there even is a plot)


#7

Really funny.:joy:Can’t wait for more :relaxed:


#8

i must say that was out in left field there. I mean really deep, deep right field there wow.


#9

not my type of wip, but good luck with it anyway :slightly_smiling:


#10

I absolutely loved this (especially since my MCs a werewolf) I think this will make a great game it’s hilarious!


#11

Hahaha, okay, this was surprisingly cute and original. I did actually laugh out loud. I’m not sure what else you’re looking for it to do, but CS seems to work well so far for what you have in mind. I encourage you to keep going!


#12

Really interesting humor I recommend reading it :slight_smile:


#13

Dean grabs a handful of complimentary mints from the dish to fortify hunger after a meager breakfast of pussy, and moves to the standby corral to wait for notification to queue again, completely ignoring another menacing glare from the guard.

Must’ve been the guard’s wife.


#14

Really funny :joy: Good work, I’m really looking forward to this!


#15

Thanks everyone for the encouragement! I’ve been ambivalent about which project I should work on first, but this helps a lot.