Sorcerer Combat: Atomica (WIP) (Update 4/9/2024)

Yes Or No for Gender Selecting
  • Gender Selectable Yay.
  • Or Gender Selection Nay.
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@UndescribedNight tell me if you want the poll closed or not. :ok_hand: Or if you still want it up I can leave it here :upside_down_face:

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Last step post. :hugs::kissing_heart:

Same gender Selectable is great sometimes but a fixed gender makes the characters more believable for me too. @Vicky_ThePanda

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Choosing anything for non player characters loses the characters individuality for me

For me anyway

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Personally, i’d like to ask a personal question. What got you creative making this story If you don’t mind me and asking

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Thanks! As for the poll it I’d like to give ppl another 2 days…

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Okay :+1:

Well it isn’t anything too special I think,a friend introduced us to the whole thing,

We got hooked on: breach, war of the west, community college hero and the like. For a while I’d just check the apps for new games until the other friend I was introduced with got way into WIPs after looking up game sequels.

Then all three of us shared an account called “A_Fan” became long time lurkers. Games like battle academia, path of the martial arts are some of the most hype books I’ve ever read and being the JJK fanatic I am…here we are. If not this I’d have made it a solo leveling esk book because apparently I can’t write unless it’s in a setting I’m already obsessed with.

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True. If I go ahead with it I’m planning on having very slight differences in character interaction, (like for example: fem variant of a character might pout where the male variant would instead do an exaggerated sigh), though it’d be very small differences in essentially expressing the exact same trait or emotion and it wouldn’t apply to every single interaction.(Also don’t want it to become too complex…).

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I’m so invested in this

Thanks again, it looks like gender selectable won out in the end, though I’ll have to implement it after the coming update seeing how much of it is already done I’ll want to release it first.

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Yay, it’s just more convenient for me as a player.

The premise is neat and all but some spellchecking is severely needed. Early on, the stat screen lists you as “Detroyer” your class is listed as “Speacial” which I think is supposed to be special…? “We’re” is missing it’s apostrophe in one of the very first choices, grimace is missing the a…
I’m not sure if you could find someone to proofread for you or something, but it might help.

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Chapter 1.1:Homecoming Out Now!

Meet more of the cast

Character creation

Condo Customization

Uniform Selection

ETC.

note: Working on updating the main post with all the introduced characters. Heres hoping it’s done today.

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Thank You for the feed back, Gramma on the choices can be a little slippery to check due to how the software handles the choice text, so I do appreciate the help spotting those mistakes.

As for stats, they’d be redundent, ‘special class’ in this setting is a step above those that still have stats that go from 0 to a 100 the ‘class one’ sorcerers and below. Even besides that the synopsis states you are as strong as and expected to fight the main antagonist on equal footing at any given time. If I put stats I’d have to have them all as ‘???’ because in most ways you are as strong as you’ll ever be.

The story isn’t a test of power or stats there are many other ways you will be challenged. Like how while there isn’t anything you could do yourself to get yourself killed outright until your inevitable clash with Atomica, you might just step into that battle with…

Nothing left to lose…

Aside from all of that there will be ‘imperfections’ in the way you apply certain ‘techniques’ that have unintended side effects, finding these imperfections in the power you share with the main antagonist has the obvious implications for your fight.

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I see, did They’re You monkey!!* Is wearing a buddhist monk uniform Looking at you very Evilly*

Bro, the story is very interesting and well polished. I was really excited about this first chapter. Great writing. Looking forward to the next updates, the universe is amazing.

Typo's etc


You’re

it

Stare

don’t

Dry would be more appropriate instead of towel. Secondly diving onto your bed

Typo pt2


drying down your long hair

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night it

Very much enjoyed the update, nonetheless I enjoyed our chat with Ray best bro out there :laughing:. Also looking forward to further Eva interactions as well as the new cast
Keep up the great work looking forward to this worlds development :+1:

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Typos Fixed and thank you!

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Thanks! Next chapter will be straight hands :smiling_imp:

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The “I WONT ALLOW IT” part on Rayen’s little bio page kinda gives me yandere vibes for some reason