Thanks for the feedback, everybody! I guess I should probably actually start chapter 2 at some point instead of blatantly procrastinating by rereading what I’ve got for the thirtieth time to make sure the variables are working right, so I’ll try to push myself on that over the weekend. Of course, comments and bug/typo reports are still totally welcome for ch1.
Glad to see there was a bit of versatility in who people chose as their player for the fight. I was worried nobody would want to play the healer, so I’m glad he got some attention. I want to make every character fun to play, and have them all feel pretty distinct from each other.
This is something I don’t expect to implement very often - this was more of a character building thing for Chall - but I do want to be really careful about making it clear that Tethering is a fundamentally consensual thing. I am thinking later on that there might be instances where you can convince a character to do an action they normally wouldn’t with a disposition/personality check, but again we’ll get there when we get there. I also want there to be a role-playing aspect like you mentioned, where acting “in character” to who you’re Tethering with can affect their attitude towards you.
Kind of opposite to the above, I also definitely want to make sure that the player is never punished for not immediately getting along with a character. Not sure how I’ll balance that perfectly, but I do always want you to have the option to play as any character so long as they’re “in the party” so to speak.
(especially with Daire since she doesn’t exactly make a great first impression)
Nice catch, that should be fixed now. Also, rereading the chargen part, I agree that the Tether thing may be kind of abrupt. I might switch the “first Tether” scene and the class pick scene to see if that flows better. And yeah, your assessment of that one bolded line with no attributed speaker is pretty much right on the money.
I don’t do a whole lot of social media stuff, but I’m not really against having one. I just don’t know if I’d remember to ever use it, lol. I’ll check it out and see if it looks interesting.