anyways i have made episode with the help of 2ton like you play first ep and then the second ep is unlocked i will make first ep and then put it on here as a demo
almost done the first chapter it isn’t really long but its not small either its like the size of the red grave demo but yeah there arent many choices sorry this is more like an explaining type 
I understand… you have to set the background its okay
i worked on the writing more harder tried to do my best grammer but there are only 2 choices 
, put the volume a little low the music is kinda loud at the start, the old link should be updated now
and this is not even the background its just a intro its small
the background like your childhood is like next chapter
anyone read it yet any feedback what should i improve?
Other small spelling and grammatical mistakes, I liked it. Very intriguing. Do be aware though that the “next” button appears to be blank, though it works just fine.
yeah but when you put your mouse over it, then you can see next written in it
Ah, well I was playing it on my iPhone, so I didn’t see that.
oh OK i functioned it like that what about the music do you think its too loud or does not go with the game?
dont take this the wrong way but the choices has no variation whatsoever on the text and it is kinda railroaded.
yeah because this is the start i had no other choice i had to explain some stuff but the next chapter is going to be more choice type in that you decide what type of person you are and then the real adventure begans
anyways this chapter was suppose to be like that so what do you guys think has my writing improved or was my other game’s writing was the better
any grammar mistakes, or a part that you don’t like that i need to fix?
anyways i think i am going to unlock the 2nd chapter from the start because the first chapter is not really important
the sword thing of how to hold it is simple
I lime spaghetti
there
damn you that was my plan…i hate you ur smart
Tis a blessing and a curse.
lol don’t spoil anything else by guessing and getting it right
and can you please change your comment so people don’t know about it and its not spoiled 