Seed of Calamity (WIP)

Hosted Games Works In Progress
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Np glad I could help

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Just a quick peek, looks quite interesting, please do keep at it. :blush:

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It’s good so far I enjoyed it

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So this is a story all about how your life got flip-turned upside down?

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Haha you got it! You will be moving with your auntie and uncle in Bel-air lol.

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Seems interesting. Can’t wait to read the rest of it.

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interesting start and I chose to speak through the forest which was cool but I coundnt help but think of a small frog hopping out and saying what you want?

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Lol, might have to make that an option!

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‘Ribbit.’ :neutral_face:
‘What the…?’ :hushed:
‘The pond. Know how deep it is?’ :blush:
‘Wha…what?’ :unamused:
‘Knee-deep! Ribbitribbitribbit!’ :joy:

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Cool game so far, looking forward to see where it goes.

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So a small update to the first scene. I am trying to flesh out the world a little, though I will have to apologize for the clunky writing. It’s still a draft so I will go back and fix that up later. Make it sound eloquent and all that!

If you choose to take over one of the humans you will have to play as a preset character, with that characters features already determined. If you don’t go that route you will be able to customize to your imaginations liking.

Still plan to get the stat page up and working. It will be needed next chapter so I will get it done whenever I can!

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There will be another update into the choice of what your home in Mira Kar’ is like. I haven’t had time to fully adopt that piece in yet.

I know that portions are written sloppy…sorry :sob:

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Don’t worry about typos - those can be corrected. Keep writing, that is what matters. :blush:

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Oh I like it! I can’t wait for more.

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@Mydoghasfleas Assuming I uploaded this correctly, the image below occurred upon clicking the game link.

1440×2560 137 KB

Edit: Didn’t see the top post was updated, sorry.

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I have the link up and working again. Also, have a prototype stat page started.
Sorry for the delay, I was feeling a bit disheartened and unsure if I wanted to continue. Now I have a bit of fire in the belly, and ready to go.
Chapter two is complete, but I decided against posting until the writing is edited. Chapter one writing is still a mess, so expect regular updates to help even out the rough draft edge.

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Noticed some broken choices and variables. Will get those fixed after work.

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all line 28: Non-existent variable ‘natures’

fall line 22: Non-existent variable ‘intimidating’

well… at least I can be magical?

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lol thanks for pointing those out

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also keep getting a 404 error after choosing how to deal with the humans in the forest, not sure if its just me getting that tho…