Hey all, I’m new to this forum so go easy on me. I’m writing a game called Salt City Private Eye. You play an unconventional character with a problematic family who inherits their famous father’s private detection agency. There are cases to solve, but there’s a twist to your character’s situation that makes it difficult for them to make money from clients.
I’ll let you play it and find out what that is. I’m keen for any feedback you feel inclined to offer as this is my first time using choicescript and I’m sure to make some rookie mistakes. You can play as a guy/girl/or neither and I’ve sorted through probably around half the achievements.
Currently it’s about 20K words, or 3.5 chapters in. It’ll probably be a 100k+ word game when finished.
I’ve put the first chapters up here: https://dashingdon.com/play/clarge/salt-city-private-eye/mygame/index.php?cb=61356
Thanks, and talk soon…
Edit: as a couple of people have pointed out, this game contains a fair bit of drinking and smoking on the part of various characters, including the MC if they choose. Proceed with caution. It’s not a game for children.
Edit 2: I live in Australia so replies may be a little delayed since I’m asleep while you’re up and about.