Debt of Deception (Prologue, 21k+ words) (02/28/2025)

Hello! My name is Diane, and this is my first interactive fiction novel. In this 18+ gritty crime thriller with a slice-of-life twist, you’ll step into the shoes of a stay-at-home parent who becomes entangled in a dangerous world of crime.

Demo: CoGDemos

Link to my tumblr: @debtofdeception-if on Tumblr

Summary

Life used to be about toddler tantrums and sleepless nights. Now, it’s about dodging bullets and prison bars—thanks to your charming spouse.

It all started when you were almost finished preparing dinner, as you did every night, when your spouse stumbled through the door, bloody and bruised—with a revelation that would shatter your world. Their hidden gambling addiction has racked up a staggering debt, but that’s not even the worst part. They owe half a million dollars to MC-14, one of the most ruthless gangs in the city. You have 8 months to gather the money, or your family will pay the ultimate price.

Thrown into a deadly game you never asked to play, you’re forced to make impossible choices to survive. Can you protect your family? Can your marriage survive this betrayal? Do you even want it to? Will you come out of this situation as the person you always thought you were, or will this dark world you’ve been thrust into reveal who you really are?

Features

:moneybag:Customize your character; their name, gender, sexuality, physical appearance, personality, background, choose how birth affected your character mentally and physically, IF they gave birth. and so much more. Customization matters!

:moneybag:Choose your character’s age; you can be in your early 20s or 30s. Were you a teen parent or not?

:moneybag: Customize your 5 year old child.

:moneybag:Determine who you were before you became a parent, how you feel about parenthood and suburban life in general.

:moneybag:Do jobs for a criminal organization in order to pay back your spouse’s debt, whether you succeed or fail is on you.

:moneybag:Determine what kind of relationship you have with your spouse and child.

:moneybag:You may have to be a stay-at-home parent but you can choose why you decided to stay home.

:moneybag:Get a divorce or try to fix your marriage? It’s your choice.

:moneybag:Try to manage a double life.

:moneybag:Drama, chaos, and more drama.

:moneybag:Determine how you feel about the life of crime.

:moneybag:Determine what kind of parent you are.

:moneybag:Try to revive your broken marriage with your spouse or possibly romance the ruthless leader of MC-14. Maybe even get yourself involved in a messy love triangle….oof, or have some hookups along the way.

:moneybag:Try to manage your expenses, pay your bills on time, and for the love of god, don’t lose the house!

Romantic Interests

:moneybag:Alaric/Alara Coleman- The Spouse​:ring:

Age: 21 or 30 (Depends on the MC’s age).

Occupation: A software engineer at Cordovian Technologies. If you choose the teen parent route, the story will delve into how A secured this position at a young age and manages to support a family of three on a single income.

Description:

The love of your life, your best friend, the one person you always felt you could trust without question. There was never a secret between you two… or so you thought. You and A were high school sweethearts, and from the moment you met, you felt something inexplicably special. Smart, funny, goofy, and effortlessly charming, A had a way of making everyone feel at ease, their infectious laughter always filling the room. The A you knew was capable and reliable—loyal to a fault, always showing up when needed. They never broke a promise, and their word was unshakeable. It seemed like A could do no wrong—excelling in every area, from academics to extracurriculars. They were the golden child, the kind of person everyone admired. Yet, in the quiet moments, you couldn’t shake the feeling that maybe no one, not even A, could truly be that perfect… Maybe you were right.

Tropes: High School sweethearts, golden retriever, soulmates.

Red Flags : Deceptive, prideful, egotistical, self-destructive.

Green Flags: Protective, intelligent, self-sacrificing.

Physical Description:

Male A: A stands at 5’9” with a lean, subtly athletic build. His short, wavy dark blonde hair is styled in a textured crop, he has light blue eyes and light freckles that dot only his face. He has fair skin , and his style leans toward a sporty, preppy aesthetic.

Female A: A stands at 5’6” with a lean, subtly athletic build. Her shoulder length, wavy dark blonde hair is styled in beach waves, complementing her sharp blue eyes and light freckles that dot only her face. Her fair skin has a natural, youthful tone, and her style leans toward a preppy aesthetic.

:moneybag:Victor/Victoria Delgado- The Leader :skull:

Age: 35.

Occupation: Leader of the MC-14 gang.

Description:

V Delgado is a gang leader who embodies cold ruthlessness. From birth, they were immersed in a world of crime, violence, and destruction, which forged them into the stoic, calculating figure they are today. With an enigmatic allure and an icy demeanor, V is a master of control—of others and of themselves. Words are unnecessary to them; actions speak louder, and they lead with unflinching efficiency. Brutality is second nature, and they waste no time or energy on hesitation. Their rise to power came through a mix of cunning and raw force, and they will go to any lengths to maintain their dominance. V isn’t a person to be admired, but something about their very presence pulls at you. They are a living, breathing reminder that not all paths to power are clean—and yet, you can’t help but wonder if, maybe, you could get lost in their darkness.

Tropes: Corruption, enemies to lovers, mama I’m in love with a criminal, dark romance, forbidden.

Red Flags: Possessive, controlling, domineering, dangerous, emotionally detached, unpredictable.

Green Flags: They….like puppies, jk. Determined, strong, resilient, very protective and loyal to those who earn their trust and loyalty (which is very few).

Physical Description:

Male V: Standing at a commanding 6’4”, V Delgado carries a powerful, muscular build. He has an olive skin tone. His short, straight dark brown hair is kept in a no-nonsense buzz cut, matching the sharp intensity of his hazel eyes—eyes that hold a calculating, unnerving depth. A prominent scar runs from the corner of his mouth, slashing upward to his ear. His right arm is covered in a detailed sleeve tattoo of a serpent. V’s wardrobe leans toward practicality—subdued, simple outfits that blend into the background. His nice clothes, always at risk of becoming bloodied or torn, are too inconvenient for him to care about; function always comes before appearance.

Female V:Standing at a commanding 5’11”, V Delgado carries an athletic, hourglass build.She has an olive skin tone. Her waist length, straight dark brown hair is kept in a loose style, her hazel eyes hold a calculating, unnerving depth. A prominent scar runs from the corner of her mouth, slashing upward to her ear, a constant reminder of past conflicts. Her right arm is covered in a detailed sleeve tattoo of a serpent, symbolizing her cunning and dangerous nature. Female V’s wardrobe, unlike male V, tends to be elegant, fashionable, sleek, and refined.

Side Characters

:moneybag:Renay Bueller-The Bestie :people_hugging:

Age: 21, or 30 (Depends on the MC’s age).

Occupation: If Renay is 21, she’s currently pursuing her bachelor’s degree in graphic design at the University of Ridgepoint. If she’s 30, she works as a graphic designer at Horizon Design Studio.

Description: Renay Bueller is your sharp-witted and fiercely confident friend who thrives on making her presence known. Her quick tongue and sassy demeanor never miss a beat, and she’s always ready with a perfectly timed comeback that leaves no room for hesitation. Renay is unapologetically bold in everything she does, embracing her individuality with a flair that’s both magnetic and unshakeable. Her charm lies in her unfiltered honesty and the playful, yet unapologetic, attitude she brings to every conversation.

Physical Description: Renay has curly red hair that falls just above her shoulder. Standing tall, her frame is full and curvy, embodying a blend of strength and softness. She has light green eyes and a tan skin tone. She typically wears bold prints and bright colors, which reflect her bold and loud personality.

:moneybag:Haruki “Haru” Kim- The Jokester :performing_arts:Possible hookup option

Age: 20.

Occupation: Works as a goon for the MC-14 gang.

Description: Haru Kim is a volatile and unpredictable henchman, known for his chaotic nature and love of causing mayhem. A fearless jokester with a creative streak, Haru thrives on bending the rules, often disregarding orders and pushing boundaries. Recently, he’s been testing V’s patience with his disobedience, straining the once-solid respect between them. Despite this, V remembers the time Haru saved their life, holding it in high regard. However, there’s a limit to how much disrespect and insubordination V is willing to tolerate before they must make a choice about Haru’s future in the gang.

Physical Description: Haru is of Asian descent, standing at a short height with a lanky frame. His platinum blonde hair is styled in a messy, short cut, often looking deliberately unkempt. He has dark eyes. His fashion leans toward grunge, favoring oversized, worn-in pieces—ripped jeans, band tees, and leather jackets—reflecting his rebellious nature. His overall appearance gives off a carefree, slightly disheveled vibe, perfectly complementing his chaotic personality.

:moneybag:Jacob Johnson- The Muscle :muscle: Possible hookup option

Age: 27.

Occupation: Works as a goon for the MC-14 gang.

Description: Jacob is impulsive and quick-tempered, often letting his emotions drive his actions. Fiercely protective of their gang leader, V, Jacob is known for his intimidating presence and a deep sense of loyalty. He thrives in combat, showcasing impressive skills in a fight, but his reckless tendencies can sometimes jeopardize carefully laid plans. His unwavering loyalty is both a strength and a flaw, as he often charges into dangerous situations without fully considering the consequences.

Physical Description: Jacob is of African American descent, with closely cropped black hair in a buzz cut and intense dark brown eyes. Standing tall with a muscular build, his presence is commanding and his physique speaks to years of physical training and strength.

:moneybag:Kenny Lockwood-The Veteran :military_helmet:

Age: 52.

Occupation: MC-14 gang’s second in command.

Description: Kenny is a stoic and disciplined individual, harboring a dark past known only to V. With a background in combat and tactical expertise, he is stealthy and calculated in his actions. Though he often butts heads with the younger, more reckless members of the gang, his experience and steady demeanor make him V’s most trusted and reliable confidant.

Physical Description: Kenny is an older man with a grizzled appearance and a bald head. He dresses in an unassuming, practical manner, blending into his surroundings. Of average height and build, his grey eyes carry a quiet intensity that hints at the depth of his experience.

:moneybag:Lauren/Lorenzo Esposito- The Fiancé :broken_heart:

Age: 30.

Occupation: Nepo baby.

Description: L. Esposito is V’s fiancé—a calculated arrangement orchestrated by their parents to cement loyalty and strengthen the alliance between the MC-14 and Hollowed Saints gangs. While V agreed to the engagement stoically and without hesitation, seeing it as a strategic move for the business, L’s feelings are far from transactional. Cunning, charming, and adept at reading people, L is a master of manipulation when needed. Yet beneath their calculated exterior lies a flicker of compassion and a surprising romantic streak. They genuinely crave a deeper connection with V and are determined to claim that love—no matter who stands in their way. Watch your back.

Physical Description: L. Esposito has sleek, dark brown hair that falls neatly into place, complementing their warm, light brown eyes that always seem to be calculating their next move. Slightly below average in height with a petite, lithe frame, they exude confidence that makes them seem larger than life. Their impeccable sense of style gravitates toward high-end designer clothing—tailored to perfection, whether in sharp suits or sophisticated casual wear. Female L favors bold makeup, often sporting a sultry smokey eye paired with a classic red lip, embodying elegance with an edge.

:moneybag:PTA Demons :imp:- A clique of has-beens who peaked in high school and made your freshman year a living hell. Now they’re attending PTA meetings—proof that parenting should require a license. Will encounter them the most if you choose to attend PTA meetings

Amanda Willmont- The “HBIC” :crown:

Age: 25, or 34 (depends on MC’s age).

Occupation: Nurse for Redwood Medical.

Description: Amanda Willmont is a former high school queen bee who never quite moved past her glory days. Beneath her deceptively sweet demeanor lies a sharp, catty edge. She’s fiercely competitive, a master of passive-aggressive jabs, and always seems determined to undercut whatever I do, as though winning petty battles is her life’s purpose.

Physical Description: Amanda has long, luscious blonde locks that cascade down her back. Her petite frame stands at a striking, model-like height. She’s always impeccably dressed in preppy ensembles, with pink as her signature color—a hue that dominates her wardrobe. Flawless makeup is her armor, and she never steps outside without every detail meticulously in place.

:teddy_bear: Child: Emily Willmont.

Senae Zitkala- The Follower :iphone:Possible hookup option

Age: 25, or 34 (depends on the MC’s age).

Occupation: Blogger.

Description: Senae Zitkala is a timid and impressionable individual who clings to Amanda’s every word, eager to please. Easily swayed by others, Senae’s insecurity often leads her to seek validation through drama and gossip.

Physical Description: Senae has a medium brown complexion and long, sleek black hair. Her style is refined and reminiscent of old-money elegance, favoring timeless and polished attire. Short in stature with a willowy, graceful build.

:teddy_bear: Child: Isi Zitkala

Dan Meadows- The Ex Jock :football:

Age: 25, or 34 (depends on MC’s age).

Occupation: Briar Prep football coach

Description: Dan Meadows is a cocky, self-assured jock with a penchant for arrogance and an air of entitlement. Quick to brag about his accomplishments, he thrives on attention and often dismisses the opinions of others. Though confident in his physical prowess, he has a tendency to be air-headed.

Physical Description: Dan is tall and well-built with a lean, athletic physique. His caramel brown hair is often tousled in a carefree manner, complementing his striking green eyes and fair skin. He gravitates toward a sporty, casual style—think fitted tees, joggers, and clean sneakers.

:teddy_bear: Child: Kyler Meadows.

:moneybag:Jimmy/Jain Lockwood :policeman:-An FBI agent who also happens to be a ghost from your past—one you wish had stayed buried.

Age: 25, or 34 (depends on MC’s age).

Occupation: FBI agent.

Serious trigger warnings with this one

Description: J Lockwood is the FBI agent assigned to a case that entails investigating MC-14. But J is more than just an investigator—they’re a ghost from your past, the embodiment of everything you’ve tried to leave behind. On the surface, J is charming, polite, and socially adept, seamlessly fitting into any environment. Their easy smile and confident demeanor mask a darker truth: a relentless, obsessive manipulator who bends reality to fit their desires. Beneath the polished exterior lies a dangerous fixation—J has convinced themselves that your rejection is merely a challenge to conquer. Where others see professionalism, you see the chilling glint of possession in their eyes. And all you’ve ever wanted is to be free of them.

Physical Description: J Lockwood stands slightly taller than average, with a commanding presence that naturally draws attention. Their thick, jet-black hair is neatly styled, a sharp contrast to their ice-blue eyes that seem to pierce through anyone they meet. J’s pale skin hints at long hours spent under artificial lights rather than in the sun. Their athletic build, honed through discipline and physical rigor, is evident in their poised stance and confident movements. Everything about their appearance suggests control—but it’s the chilling intensity behind those eyes that’s impossible to ignore.

:moneybag:Monica Delgado- The Matriarch :princess:

Age: 62.

Occupation: Retired.

Description: Monica Delgado is warm, nurturing, and deeply affectionate toward those she holds close, embodying a protective and compassionate mother figure. However, in public and professional settings, she transforms into a fierce and authoritative presence, displaying a cutthroat demeanor that commands respect and fear.

Physical Description: Monica Delgado is a petite woman with an average build. She has dark brown hair interwoven with elegant grey streaks that frame her face. She has hazel eyes, and an olive skin tone. She has a shorter stature.

:moneybag:Frank Delgado- The Patriarch :prince:

Age: 62.

Occupation: Retired.

Description: Frank Delgado is a disciplined and calculating man who approaches both his criminal organization and family life with a cold, businesslike mindset. Emotionally detached and lacking empathy, he views emotional bonds as a weakness and struggles to connect with his child. His pragmatic and methodical approach to life has shaped V, who inherited many of his traits, including his reserved demeanor and analytical mindset.

Physical Description: Frank Delgado is a tall, distinguished man with an imposing presence. Despite his age, he maintains a fit physique. He has a full head of grey hair that matches his well-groomed grey mustache and beard. His olive skin tone and light brown eyes hint at a steely, calculating nature.

:moneybag:Sarah Coleman- The Loving Mother :breast_feeding:

Age: 54.

Occupation: Retired.

Description: Sarah Coleman radiates warmth and positivity wherever she goes. With an optimistic outlook, she sees challenges as opportunities and believes in the inherent good in people. Her kindness is evident in the small, thoughtful gestures she offers to friends and strangers alike. Always supportive, Sarah has a natural talent for listening and uplifting those around her, often placing the needs of others before her own. She approaches life with a gentle resilience, driven by her desire to make the world a little brighter for everyone she encounters.

Physical Description: Sarah Coleman has short blonde hair styled in a pixie cut that frames her face. She has blue and a dusting of freckles across her nose and cheeks. Standing shorter than average, she has a lithe frame.

:moneybag:Daniel Coleman- The Loving Father :man_feeding_baby:

Age: 54.

Occupation: Retired.

Description: Daniel Coleman is charismatic and has a playful, and lighthearted demeanor. He has an easy going nature and sharp sense of humor making him effortlessly likable, often lightening tense situations with a well-timed joke or witty comment.

Physical Description: Daniel Coleman has greying sandy blonde hair. He has dark blue eyes that often gleam with humor and warmth. He Stands at an average height, and carries a slightly chubbier build.

:moneybag:Mandy (last name depending on MC)- Mommy Dearest :chains:‍:boom:

Age: 57

Occupation: Retired

Born In Poverty Background Description: Mandy is a person who has a rough and harsh demeanor, often resorting to verbally or physically aggressive behaviors to gain control. She’s impulsive, and quick to lash out at others, especially when things don’t go her way. She tends to use her aggression to intimidate and belittle those she deems as beneath her. She is crude and trashy and ever since you can remember, her abusiveness has made you feel nothing but emotional and physical pain, constantly creating a toxic environment that you couldn’t wait to escape from.

High Middle Class Background Description: Mandy has always been someone who placed immense value on appearances and status. She’s condescending and dismissive of others, always believing her way is the best way. She has a controlling nature that makes her prone to micromanaging situations and people, especially when things don’t go according to her standards. She’s a perfectionist and that drives her to be harsh, particularly with those who fail to meet her expectations. She has always been image obsessed and is only worried about how people will perceive her life, never caring about how you’ve felt. You couldn’t wait to escape the suffocating and cold environment that she created.

Physical Description: partly depends on the MC Mandy has a voluptuous body type, and she stands at a height that is a little taller than average.

:moneybag:Bill (last name depending on MC)- The Pawn :chess_pawn:pretty much stays the same regardless of background

Age: 57

Occupation: Retired

Description: Bill is a passive, mild-mannered man who has always avoided conflict and tends to put others’ needs before his own, driven by a deep desire to please those around him. He is emotionally withdrawn, and rarely expresses his true feelings for fear of upsetting the balance of his relationships, especially with his wife, Mandy. Though he secretly has always supported you, he was too afraid to stand up to Mandy’s controlling nature. He never wanted to disown you.

Physical Description:Partly depends on the MC Bill is of average height with a lanky, slightly awkward frame. He has wire-framed glasses, and a receding hairline.

MC was disowned by their parents, the reason depends on your MC and choices.

:moneybag:Cian Murphy-Leader of rival biker gang :motorcycle: Possible hookup option

Age: 25

Occupation: Leader of the Eastside Marauders biker gang.

Description: Cian Murphy is the charismatic and ruthless leader of the Eastside Marauders, a rival biker gang to MC-14. With a mix of cocky confidence and a seductive charm, he commands respect and loyalty from his crew. Cian’s ambition drives him to constantly expand his territory, but his temper can ignite in an instant, especially when betrayed. Though vengeful, he holds onto a strong sense of morality, often struggling with the darker side of his actions. His loyalty to his gang and close allies is unwavering, but the weight of his leadership sometimes leaves him questioning the cost of his ambitions.

Physical description: Cian stands just above average height, with chin-length, wavy auburn hair. He has a lean build. His style consists of traditional biker clothing—leather jackets, worn jeans, and boots—complete with a few personalized touches.

:moneybag:Your Child :teddy_bear:

Age: 5.

Occupation: Just starting kindergarten.

Description: Your child is a joyful little bundle of light, with an innocence that shines through in everything they do. They’re courageous, never shying away from new challenges, and show a surprising level of smarts for someone so young. It’s clear they have a bright future ahead!

Content Warnings

This game is 18+

:warning:Content Warnings: This story has very dark and mature themes such as violence, gang activity, trauma, childbirth, sexual content (optional explicit), unhealthy relationship dynamics, profanity, alcohol, and drug use, struggles with mental health, child abuse, physical abuse, emotional abuse, self harm, unhealthy coping mechanisms, misogyny/sexism, homophobia, transphobia, cheating/affair? sexual harassment/sexual assault (based on a choice, so don’t worry it’ll be avoidable and nongraphic. This is NOT done by any RO or by the MC), harassment, mentions of abortion, the MC can be a very flawed and morally grey character depending on player choices, I’ll continue to add more if I notice more, or if something is brought to my attention.

Note: I do not condone any of these behaviors; they are solely included to illustrate the moral shortcomings of certain characters, including the MC, depending on player choices.

Some things to note before you read:

  • Please read the trigger warnings. This game can get dark at times and I completely understand if it’s not for you.
  • This is my first IF, so go easy on me :joy:.
  • I encourage you guys to try out different options!
  • If you guys notice any errors, including pronoun inconsistencies, I’d really appreciate it if you could either send me a screenshot or point out the exact section where the mistake occurs. This will help me fix it as quickly as possible. Thank you!

That’s all, I hope you guys enjoy. I would love to hear your thoughts and opinions when you finish.

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Great start!! There’s so much variety in the choices, and yet every one of them felt like they catered to the particular MC’s I created. I really liked all the different traumas, fears and vices too. My favourite so far has to be the “innocent, kind, no vices, meditation” MC, she’s going to be so in over her head when I romance her with the gang leader lol.

Still, I’m so shocked by the amount of debt that the spouse racked up by the way–seriously–maybe I’m just naive, but that’s so much!! What the hell. They’re insane. Especially when he was like “I’m the husband, I’ll fix this”. GIRL WHAT!? Put that pride away, this is totally not the time. RIP lmao.

Still, ugh. I cannot wait to read more. Biting at my keyboard as we speak. This is amazing.

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omg i was waiting for this one!! demo is absolutely interesting, the poor mc can’t have the peaceful day in their life but i’m eating this up :face_with_hand_over_mouth:

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So any real chances for the mc to break bad enough by the end that they might give even that M-14 leader pause?

What did you have in mind? Undercover cop in the organisation or something?

Oh, that reminds me let me suggest another way to cope for mc, particularly male mc victim of a hate crime, obsessive martial arts practice/working out.

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Very unique concept, a bit short to judge beyond that but it has potential.

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I really enjoyed this demo and the amount of character choice. Although short, I can see how this will be replayable with differing MC backgrounds and fears/vices. I look forward to reading more.

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Wow MC was given a bad hand on life and now their one good thing is crumbing down. Its so hard to forgive our other half. What were they thinking? I might forgive if they agree to get help and if we somehow survive this. At least they cared about about family despite being prideful.

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Ok, first of all this is really great! It’s such an interesting concept and I really liked this beginning. I just had two little things:

First of all, the backgrounds and vices and things are all very depressing! And don’t get me wrong, I like this type of thing. I just think all of it can be a bit much, especially if they don’t end up becoming involved in the story.

For the romance, I really like our spouse! I think he’s great and I like the route he creates. But V… can definitely be fun. I think it can be an interesting route, but it’s definitely an acquired taste to want to romance a criminal like that. I don’t think this is super important, but you might want to see if a middle ground RO is possible. Someone who isn’t a golden retriever like A, but isn’t as big of a red flag as V

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Yeah, I thought an undercover cop would be a good fit. I think it can be a really fun storyline, with the complicated morals and separate identities.

I also think someone in a similar position as us would work too, someone who’s involuntary taken part in criminal activity

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True, but if there is an undercover they are probably not from the local and notoriously corrupt police department. More likely to be some national police or if m-14 is really serious business the intelligence services.

Also true, at least at the beginning. Depending on how bad the mc is allowed to break here it may not stay that way forever, particularly should my mc discover that, like mr. White, he might actually be good at it.

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Is it supposed to end when you pick a habit or no.

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I really like how evocative your writing is, particularly in the beginning of the Prologue. Felt like I was there, seeing everything you were describing. And Alaric has got some explaining to do, seriously. Looks very interesting, looking forward to more!

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This is interesting! I look forward to seeing more!

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It looks very interesting, and I’m already looking forward to it!

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Thank you, I’m glad you appreciated the choices! That was the intention, I was honestly worried that there wasn’t enough.

Your sweet MC is definitely in for a rough time with V!

Yep! The debt is absolutely insane. The club lures people in with casino credits—essentially short-term loans—and traps them with high interest rates. There are supposed to be borrowing limits, but, of course, the gang lets people take as much as they want. Over time, those interest rates can get really brutal. If you’ve ever heard of a payday loan, it’s a similar kind of predatory system. :joy:

A’s pride makes them stubborn. They’d always rather take the harder route if it means keeping their ego intact.

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Thanks! And don’t worry, it won’t be all doom and gloom the whole time. :joy:

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Oh yeah! This story is loosely inspired by Breaking Bad, so there will be plenty of opportunities to take that darker path.

Martial arts and exercise will be a choice! I’ve decided to make them hobbies the MC can choose in Chapter 1.

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They definitely weren’t thinking! :joy: In the “forgive with conditions” route, the MC can push A to get help—though A won’t be happy about it. They’ll be pretty reluctant about it, and won’t start out taking the sessions seriously.

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Thank you!

I completely understand this—I was a bit worried about that too. But don’t worry, every aspect serves a purpose! I did include options to opt out of things like fears, vices, and certain trauma choices, but the MC having an abusive background is going to be essential to the story. I am going for a darker themed story, so I see how it can be off putting.

This was something I worried about too. I decided to stick with just two for now so I wouldn’t overwhelm myself—maybe I’ll add another once I’m more comfortable. That said, a cop wouldn’t be a great fit :joy: not in Ridgepoint. It would have to be someone from outside the city.

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Nope! Sorry about that. Could you send me a screenshot of where it cuts off for you? I’ll look into fixing it. Did you get an error message?