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I found something wrong with it, apostrophe-wise! Naturally I expect full beta-tester credit.
Other than that, perfect in every way.
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Oh damn! Well now I feel stupid. 
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The beginning is quite good so far, I really like how we can teach Alex to be a better warrior (even though MC’s skill suffer because of that). Will there be more scenes like those in future chapters?
What I found weird was the choice about which would make a good partner, Alexius or Lula. While we got a whole scene of training with Alex, we barely see just how good Lula in combat at chapter 1. Imo, it would be a good idea to add a combat scene with Lula too.
I will look forward for the next update!
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Short but an exciting reintroduction
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I am curious about how the MC’s approach to Alex’s training will turn out in the long term and what events are in store for them and how it will impact their relationship.
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Well spotted, Sabrina! Thanks for pointing those out. 
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It’s great so far and I didn’t notice any errors while I was playing. Can’t wait to see what’s going on with Caecilia. I image she’d have conflicted feelings for our character, especially if her father is teaching us how to fight.
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