If we try to stay completely dark magic is that good or bad?
Technically, neither good nor bad. The plan is to make it so that any “build” could work.
In story terms, I’d say that you’ll have bigger concerns than the kind of sorcery you use, so aside of a few possible comments, you should be fine.
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He’s so mysterious. Maybe he’s the long lost prince of some faraway land, a noble fugitive tortured by his past. And now he’s here, hiding from his enemies, posing as a warlord’s apprentice… how interesting this’d be!
…is it wrong that I actually do this sometimes (not as often as the dreamy MC, but still occasionally)?
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wow you and me sometime had a similar way of thinking!! 
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I’d say this about accurately describes my MC.
Will we be able to chat up more than one shiny distract…friend?
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I’m going to re-code this segment so that you’ll be able to talk to everyone in a succession. Silly me, why didn’t I think about it right away…
The second phase is going to be like this too, but for the third and fourth you’ll have to choose.
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Alright, done. Now you can talk to everyone instead of choosing just one person. Moving on.
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This must be the “dreamy” response … 
I am wondering if I should include physical descriptions of characters, since I have them in my notes anyway. Or is it better to leave them ambitious?..
(also, there won’t be any bad/“you died” ends after all)
As for the progress, it’s moving. I’m at the second skill-building/talking section now, so Ch1 should be finished soon. I have a better feeling of where this story is headed now. It doesn’t look like it’ll be action/physical violence-heavy, but it’ll have some psychologically ‘heavy’ moments. I’m curious to see where my writing will take me, haha.
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i’d say you should include the description if you already have them anyway XD (sometimes the description can trigger our own (a.k.a reader) imagination) 
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I really like this so far! It’s an intriguing concept and I love your writing style. Also the characters seem really cool so far. ((Which is funny, since usually I’m always more interested in the personality Akio has, but for some reason I find myself more intrigued by Eiji? He seems like something is seriously wrong, and I want to help 
))
Also the MC personality options are great. Dreamy MC is basically me. ((Especially the apricat. Feels like something I would space out over too. We can both just sit and stare at a wall finding patterns in the cracks together.))
Oh, also, I get an error at the end of the demo, incorrect indentation ((“correct number would be 4 instead of 6” , I’ll have to check back when I’m not on my phone for the right number)). Was that supposed to be there as the end of the demo? Or is it a glitch?
It’s right before we fight the demons with Eiji. Either choice, raise the shield or destroy them, has the same bug.
Edit: Yes, it was “expected 4 was 6” for the increasing indent.
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Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
(Oh, something is definitely wrong, and you’ll get to help… eventually, hehe)
Dreamy seems to be relatable for quite a number of people. It’s fun to write, too. (apricat is my pride because… cat)
As for the indents, whoopsie~ again. Fixed it now. The fighting scene is actually finished and there’s another small scene afterwards.
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what? there is a fight scene? where?!
oh right, i think i forgot to check the last update (oops!!). will be back with some report (if there is any)
Err, it’s not a real update, haha. I wasn’t planning on announcing it until the chapter is finished, but since a bug was found, it got out.
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im back~ with some typo of course
I was delayed as I had to see Father off. The was nothing sentimental about the scene; Father was still himself, and I didn’t feel like I got to know him better at all. (there)
They probably decided that “not to load” means “not to bother at all”. Not that I was comlaining, at least unless it’ll get us into trouble. (complaining)
there… and i think the rival Akio became the Friendly-teasing type now. not that i complaining though~ im liking him more (what with that smirk and grin… and that personality of him. yes i cant resist him 
), but i cant ignore Shiro either (he’s adorable in his own way ). and as for Eiji… still cant judge him just yet XD.
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Ch 1 should be finished now (not that there was much left to finish after the last ‘leaked’ update… pfft).
So as of Ch 2, the ‘personality mode’ lock should be in place. Beyond that, I don’t know as I usually don’t make an exact plan for more than a chapter ahead.
–ramble-ramble–
I’m a bit surprised by how ‘compressed’ I made it? A number of events, yet it’s only Ch1 and barely 15k words. rofl.
The “personality” will change the interactions and also some parts of the inner monologue, like what can be seen in the talking-sections. I decided that being rude won’t lock you out of anything as it’d be unfair. Sooo… instead of romancing a tsundere, you can play as one?..
This is kind of turning into ‘unusual main characters: the story’, but then again, I want to make the personalities distinct, and I want them to matter not only in terms of stats.
This should be all for now. I think.
Thanks to everyone again~
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Fixed. Thank you and sorry! Me and indents don’t get along. Next thing they’ll try to murder me in my sleep…
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Those indents are out to get all good authors, death by indent is a terrible way to go! <3
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No fair…left on a cliffhanger