One Last Time (form. The Journey) [fantasy WiP]

Funny how this option gathered so much interest. Guess it boils down to what I was talking about - not many options for the PCs to be quirky in games…

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Huh… when I selected “just approach them” for the guards, I totally wasn’t expecting to order them around. Maybe you could try providing a little more specific information for each choice?

Like, “respectful” is obvious, I believe “casual” is more laid back, and such.

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Yes, I’ll redo the names of some choices.

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its, alright… i like this Akio better :grin:

he should be happy, coz you make him more likeable :yum: and Eiji just being… Eiji (for now, i suspect there is something else behind that smile :smirk:)

i know, it just so much fun to messed around than the other personality :joy:

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The first skill-building section is in.

Basically, you choose with whom to train and it nets you a small scene and an increase in a skill.

Next to code is the first relationship-building section (you choose with whom to spend time and it nets you a scene… blahblah).

Skill breakdown:

  • Eiji: Magic Skill
  • Akio: Magic Skill and Light
  • train by yourself: Magic Skill and Dark
  • Sakura: Divination
  • Shiro: Fighting (defensive)
  • Takako: Fighting (offensive)
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What? That’s a 100% totally normal reaction :blush:

It’s also completely normal to want to make a necklace out of someone’s eyes

I rephrased this line, so no more eyes will be hurt.

Well at least I won’t think of itachi uchiha every time i think about the mc

Did someone say… Itachi??? fangirling intensifies

(he used to be one of my favorite anime characters, along with Byakuya from Bleach and Kanda from D.Gray-man. I always fell for the ones who’d either be killed off or almost killed off)

Now granted I haven’t seen much of Sakura and perhaps she will be wonderful, but I still can’t help hoping that you do add another RO for lesbian MCs, makes me nervous to only have one option :disappointed:

My assumption was that both Takako and (more importantly) Akio had been made bi/pan too, so hopefully you’ve got at least two.

I’ll likely go with the earlier suggestion of making everyone either MC-sexual or bi/pan so that everyone would be available for everyone.

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honestly go with what you think would be best with the type of one your making

The first “talking” sequence is in. Took me forever because it’s so… sprawling…? on the plus side, you can now learn a bit more about the characters.

(there will be one more section like this in Ch1 and one in Ch2 and Ch3, afterwards you’ll get “locked”.)

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Do you want me to update your thread title to indicate there was an update?

Thank you, but there’s no need. I still can update it by myself for now, and as I usually do many small updates instead of fewer big ones, updating the title every time would be just too tedious.

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o.k. After about a month, you’ll need to get a moderator to make the first post a wiki… just so you’ll know what to do when the time comes.

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why did i ran out of love again :weary: i want to like this minor update post :neutral_face:

btw, didn’t find typo for now and i want to say i really like Akio personality~ :heart_eyes: and surprisingly… i found Shiro more likeable than before :grin: he is kinda cute, in his own way that is. didn’t try Eiji talk yet :grin:

Edit : Eiji is kind of creepy and scary (and really suspicious) :grimacing: . you did good with your writing to display how creepy he is :scream:

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Aww, thank you. Akio is happy, Shiro is secretly happy, and Eiji still has no idea what’s going on.

And I’m glad his scene got the point across, hehe.

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