On Foxtrot Hill - (WIP)

Hey guys, really excited about that chapter release and even more so for number six coming along! So because of the kinda opaque nature of some of the updates-changes to playtest- I’m here to babble about it a wee bit!

A few things things changed around for Sei and Kylie’s initial conversation and description. This part was a bit of a mess, but it should be all good now. Hopefully.

We also pretty much changed the entire tone for Jamie and a lot of the wording along his route to seem less…well…creepy/teenage fangirling over clothing and kiiiind of his personality just being everywhere. So after realizing what he WOULD NOT say, I think we got a rough idea of his actual character.

Gabriel is deepening a little bit as a character- less standing around being a quiet, kind of mother hen. Like, clucking and and everything. :chicken:

Plus, if you noticed Kylie and Gabriel are siblings!

whoooo~

long post, but welps. Anywhoo, thoughts and opinions are always appreciated and if you guys like this ramble, let me know so I can keep everyone updated. And rambled at.

adios, amigos/amigas~

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