Okay,
I’m struggling with my ‘affinities’ section, so it would be a big help if anyone could give me some pointers today on intimidating language and phrases.
help out by answering - QUESTION OF THE DAY - 
“What do people find intimidating?” - 12/04/16
Other aspiring writers out there might be interested in reading the general thoughts on writing stories with choice from megalithic Cog forum contributors @Cecilia_Rosewood, @Silverstone, @Zolataya, @Jackrabbit, @Sovereign2Lilith, @WulfyK, @Doctor on the thread below.
seriously - read, learn, and benefit from the awesomeness