October 2024's Writer Support Thread

random question for everyone … how often do you take a full, entire day off working? like work and/or school and/or writing. trying to make myself feel more normal about taking regular, full-day breaks hahahahahah. i think it’s tricky cuz writing is so fluid (like cuz i write from home usually) and also so fun most of the time i forget i have to make distance from it sometimes.

anyways i took a full day off yesterday it was awesome but i feel guilty about being a day behind as i’m sure many of us feel sometimes. prob struggling more with this too since deux à deux is my first IF project (and the first writing i’ve done just for myself/not ghostwriting in a WHILE). just wanted to see everyone’s vibe on this!

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I don’t.

I just ease off the work on some days when I’m not feeling it, writing a few hundred words instead of my normal 2-3k.

It’s kind of a habit now, to the point where even when I have “days off”, I just end up writing something else.

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I take a day off once a week, (Sundays) and that seems to work really well for me.

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that’s sort of what i’m leaning towards as well. i truly felt so much more ready to work after that one day off so i might make it a weekly ritual! :slight_smile:

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In today’s news, I’m convinced my Halloween jam game is terrible. :sweat_smile:

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You have one, which makes it better than mine :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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I have a couple hundred words of one. :sweat_smile:

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Shhh, DONT SAY THAT! Bad, lili!

There is no way to do a bad jam entry except not doing the rules. A jam is to experiment have fun and vibe with people.

There is no score of judgment. Also it is a jam made by me. It is not one of those posh stuff that look down newbies.

I understand well the feeling. But it is just impostor syndrome. You CAN BEAT UP THE SYNDROME WE ALL CAN!!

If you need my help My pmis always open

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Git would definitely work but I would not want to explain git to anybody who doesn’t already use it.

IMO something like freefilesync is a lot easier to use because once you set it up it’s just moving and renaming files in your own filesystem and you can access them in the same way you would any other file without ever having to deal with git.

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State of our Lives - October 2024

I hope you’re having a wonderful week!

This is the next monthly development update series for Once in a Lifetime, a text-based life simulator I’ve been developing since March of this year!

Once in a Lifetime’s development has progressed at a moderate pace in the prior month, as health based reasons caused a slowdown on what was previously a high rate of development. Nonetheless, I’m here, I’m there, I’m everywhere!

Let’s delve in, shall we?


Development by the Numbers

Once in a Lifetime received a further calculations from August 31, 2024 to October 5, 2024, with calculations as follows:

  • August 31, 2024: 66,861 words including command lines. 13,026 words excluding command lines.
  • October 5, 2024: 83,685 words including command lines. 14,435 words excluding command lines.
  • Total Difference: 16,824 words, of which 1,409 words were direct writing.

It was not nearly as productive a month as August, and my health is to blame. Nonetheless, I am slowly churning things back into gear, and eager to kick things back up again!


What’s Been Done?

  • The Friends System has now been implemented. You may now have up to 15 normal friends and 3 besties. This system allows demotion/promotion of friends to/from besties to normies. It additionally allows for removing friendships of your own accord, or falling out with friends.
  • Dynamic generation was fully extended to father-in-laws, mother-in-laws, 3 brothers-in-law and 3 sisters-in-law, 6 aunts (3 father, 3 mother side), 6 uncles (same thing), and up to 6 cousins.
  • Solving a colossal bottleneck in my pipeline that has removed the loading screen requirement for dynamic generation through a refactor that was looking me dead in the face and I couldn’t see it.
  • Report Card system implemented in the backend with dynamic interface calculations.
  • Report Card/Grades at a glance implemented to Pre-School Interface.
  • Your Teacher is now recognized in the Pre-School interface and their gender is accurately appended with Mr./Mrs.
  • Character Creator split into two sections (Personality/Personal Identifying Information is section #1, while Physical/Appearance details is Section #2) for usability/UI/UX.
  • Implemented Multi-Replace throughout Character Creation to append options as Not Completed/Completed.
  • Began implementing Checkpoint/Save code. (25% done)
  • Began work on new feature known as the Timeline. (15% done)

While less foundationally than August, there was still plenty of systems development, and this was while I had COVID-19 for over a week of the month with severe enough symptoms to require PAXLOVID pills. Funnily enough… I solved the bottleneck and implemented the refactor while I was barely able to breathe (workaholism isn’t a joke, kids!)

Step by Step, Once in a Lifetime continues to evolve towards a first playable build from a foundations perspective, which will begin opening the pipelines to content development.


The Timeline

The Timeline will serve as a powerful historical retelling of events within your Lifetime. Through an underlying codebase, I’ve begun crafting the ability for The Timeline to navigate and retell your choices, provide details on the consequences or benefits gained through these actions, and ultimately provide a snapshot of your life as it occurs.

Given the sheer scope of Once in a Lifetime in terms of how many events are made, this system is being optimized to prevent slowdown to the overall game. Older phones may have a brief few second delay when opening the Timeline as it has to dynamically pull all of your event data to provide historical retelling.

I am also working on the interface and breaking things up so it’s not a bombardment of information that’s haphazardly strewn in one place.

What I’m thinking is that I’ll bring things up by sections, such as:

  • Education
  • Career
  • Milestone Events (which is then further broken up by age)
  • Relationship Events (same thing)
  • Critical Events (which will be detailed and broken down further as development goes on, but is newly built into the roadmap.
  • And more.

This is definitely a process, especially given the nature of toying with my text-based engine. Nonetheless, I will be looking for feedback as I iterate on this system in the coming weeks.


Where are we going?

For the end of this month/November, I have plenty more that needs to get done, such as:

  • Implement the Timeline’s foundational bedrock code in finished form.
  • Work on implementing currency to the game.
  • Begin development of the ‘background’ expansion of the Character Creator.
  • Continue work on Pre-School Milestone Events.
  • Continue work on implementing family interactions.
  • Properly implement death within the game alongside a graveyard list/system of sorts. (Was a September goal but… health and COVID lol).
  • And more, if I can fit it!

Wrapping Up

There’s so much done, and so much more to do. Nonetheless, I am beyond eager to continue and bring this project to life as I delve deeper into the world of life simulation. I’ve attached some screenshots below!

Pre-School Interface Updates!

Character Creator Split! (2 Images)

Cousin Interface! (Recognizing Parents, too!)


I hope you have a wonderful remainder of the Spooky Season!
~Zach

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Do what you need to do. Writing CS games is not a job for most people, don’t treat it like one if it’ll just burn you out. If you find it fun, then write if you get the time. It’s going to depend on how you feel.

(Do as I say not as I do. I regularly don’t get any full days off and you do not want to end up with my stress levels, it’s not healthy, you’ll probably get sick/burnt out. If you actually have the option to do so to take a day off as you need it.)

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I’d hate to have a job with no days off ever, for that matter.

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Yeah, even if you’re self-employed it’s best to try to avoid being your own nightmare boss. I don’t work on weekends unless it’s an unusual situation but generally work Monday-Friday, typically 9-5. Apart from when I’m ill, like I am at the moment :sob: so I’m resting right now.

I have, however, had an outline requested which I’m excited about!

Here are some more pictures that relate to it.

And the others from before.

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Funny question, but what are the… so to say, tells that the author is not a native English speaker? I find that I’ve hit a certain wall in my editing - it looks alright to me, but I just don’t know how it’s supposed to sound right in full anyway.

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I know the struggle. My advice is first ask a native. But if not posible put the text in a English voice reader. You would notice better if dialogue feels off.

Reading yourself works if you actually know how to talk English. I don’t. I have never spoken English except at beginning of my journey through learning and ended up so bullyed that I have never tried again.

Only way to improve is EDIT EDIT AND MORE EDIT.

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I think it’s usually the idioms and colloquialisms. Most native speakers will not just pepper their speech with a lot of slang, but also a lot of local slang or pronunciations which give away where they live and the local culture they’re familiar with.

Another giveaway is sentence flow, since native-speakers spend so much time speaking the language, they almost have an intuitive understanding of how sentences should be structured to make themselves understood in a certain way.

It’s often subtle, and not entirely easy to get a handle on (I’m not a native english speaker either), but it is there.

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I almost always take Saturdays off. On top of that, I try to take a day off about once a month, but sometimes, there are too many errands and other things that get in the way. I miss too much writing time for unrelated reasons (that aren’t restful) that I have to remind myself hos long it’s been since I took a deliberate break.

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Emergency Services had already been and gone before you’d gotten here. The only other people here besides you and ${partner} are two police officers patiently waiting for you next to the shipping container.


Added this paragraph while on my break, but I need a second opinion specifically on the second line.

So do you prefer the version above or below?


Emergency Services had already been and gone before you’d gotten here. The only other people here besides you and ${partner} were the two police officers patiently waiting for you next to the shipping container.


Just a reminder that the scene takes place in the present but the police officers are there when you arrive so like the emergency services they arrived in the past.

Any opinions would be appreciated as always!

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I am not native, so my opinion won’t hold lot of value. But for me, the first makes far more sense.
The police officers are present in that moment if you put me a past tense I would think they were there and there are not anymore so me and my partner are NOW alone.

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If it’s in present tense, then the first one works better.

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