Ah. Anyways, what year is this set in? They have IPhones, so it must be in modern times.
Yeah I was thinking about a time period of 2013-3078 donāt quote me on that just something I had in mind I want to make a quite lengthy game with many dynamics.
Oh Shiznip! That is almost two hundred years! I assume that Iām going to get some sort of robotic thing to live that long.
More like 1065 years. I think he meant 2078 though lol.
That is my impossible goal to go up to 3078 but my realistic goal would be to get to about two hundred years and I believe if I pace my self and write for long periods of time I could achieve my unrealistic goal as well as the realistic one
200 years probably would be possible with medical advances, and the ruler of a nation would have the best available.
@fantom Oh wow, I canāt believe I messed up my math the bad. I was only off by 800, thatās not too bad is it? :-S Is it?
Would that mean your family (future son/daughter) would carry on your veiw for your country? Or would they have a chance to change the type of government ? Or an out there idear- down load your mind to a computer and carry on yourself lol?
Well there are transhumanists who believe that the first people to enjoy immortality have already been born.
@DreamWalker the way I see it technology will be so advanced that your ruler may have back up bodies but I was thinking of doing you die and then someone takes over preferably your child and rule through them.
@fantom The American education system X_X
@Zane I love your story I hope there will be differences between monarchy, democratic and dictatorial regimes I will love create a almost nazi or communist regime and being a machiavelian assassin supreme leader will be a possibility
Horribleā¦
@Player Iām a democratic lover in RL and monarchic but when I play or role-play I want experiment something I hate in my life I never shoot or kill a human but is funny, be evil in a game, at least for me
I would like to see more options to focus on the military.
Will there be scandals?
I like the concept butā¦ The spelling and grammar is not good. The structure is also making me work way too hard. I want to read and enjoy the story and play the game. I do NOT want to have to work around your own work to understand what youāre trying to put across.
The dialogue certainly needs work; Stuff like this;
āGive it to meā your mother says angrily āgive it to me now, I deserve this nation , youāre to young and stupidā¦I am much smarter and helped your father, give it to me and you will be without worryā.
Isā¦ I donāt know it really is something of a petty gang argument rather than something I assume someone whom mingles with high society would say. The same criticism can be levelled at your own dad in the story.
I get the feeling youāre rushing the dialogue and story because youāre thinking of the story and its ideas and concept and spilling it onto āpaperā so to speak. You really need to step back and comb it over and make it much more smoother before putting it out.
Furthermore, itās usually an issue if you keep telling me, the reader, what Iām feeling. Donāt do that all the time. I know what Iām feeling via reading whats happening, if my dad was close to me and died (I kinda got that from your intro) then show me why that was the case. Donāt tell me I miss the guy cos heās dead and Iām feeling happy when the sun sets. Let ME draw my own feelings.
Otherwise, itās a good concept, one that if you put the work into it and slow down a bit has the potential to be one of the best on this site.
@trollhunterthethird there will be lots and lots of scandals from personal ones like Monica Lewinsky to political like Watergate.
@Mardam the options for the military are going to be so large to the point where you could be able to dominate many many countries and that may cause WWIII.
@Marajade looks like everyone likes the dictatorship I have to try the hardest on that government.
@RVallant thanks for the I kind of struggled with the mother conversation and people do like to be able to think things for themselves Iāll comb over it and if it is to be done Iāll release an update.
This is a very good and well thought out game, only a few grammatical errors but other than that this is brilliant and I hope you add on to the length of it.