Updated this in Twine I fixed the bugs and altered some of the choices.
Hi everyone I made a choose your own adventure story for a 48 hr. game jam recently. I’m thinking of expanding on the story and using Choice of Script
Let me know what you think.
You wake up to the ringing sound of your alarm clock you breathe a sigh of relief. It must have been a dream. You swore it was real.
You wake up to the ringing sound of your alarm clock you breathe a sigh of relief. It must have been a dream. You swore it was real.
Thank you! I didn’t see that there before.
You turn around to see a short woman dressed in a black dress and striped yellow corset. Next to him is the stranger from your dream .
*shouldnt it be her?
Oops yes you’re right thanks!
The story seems cool but I feel there’s a bit too little detail about the characters. For example, I think it would have been cool to see how the MC “found” Griffin and Gwen in the first place 
I would be interested to read on if you’ve written more on this story!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I completely agree, I’m going to be working in it more in the future and will add how you found them both.