Lab Rat(WIP)

[Ercole]

Hello, I encountered an error while playing. A very interesting demonstration!

[holysalmon]

Hi, I just fixed it, so it should be working now

[holysalmon]

@Valixon

Played your revised new start just now i like exspecially getting chances ce to make the Jessica lady pay just a little bit lol

As a suggestion would love to see the confrontation with police that lead to us being recruited by Jessica. Even knowing its the vehicle for the story would be interesting to expand how people might view us as a result and the like.

Thanks a lot for the feedback

The confrontation with the police and the recruitment might be explored later on, but I can’t guarantee how it would be, might just come up in a few conversations.

But I do plan to show how different people and groups see the mc as the story goes on.

[holysalmon]

New update: Fixed a bug, made some minor dialogue adjustments, and added a few new scenes. (It’s a fight, but not the actual one I mentioned before.)

Also quick question: would you prefer more frequent but smaller updates, or less frequent but larger ones?

[kizzygm]

Less frequent but larger for me.

[thedahoraa]

Larger ones. Quality over quantity.

[dkurage]

Less frequent but larger updates. But also periodic progress updates are nice too. A number of times I’ve been surprised by an update to an IF I thought was on hiatus or abandoned because the author went radio silent for many months between updates.

[Zerodaj]

That’s cool. Way more understandable, keep up the great work

[holysalmon]

I’m back with a small progress update.
I been busy, so, I’m not sure how much I’ll have for the next update or when I’ll be able to post it, but for now I’ve got around 3,000 words and an appearance from RO, which…feels like a bit of a red flag.