I enjoyed the conversation with the father. It really shows the medieval mindset and setting in how he sees his daughter’s future being about marriage to a lord. It reminds me of the conversation Ned has with Arya in GoT.
I’m not delving too much into grammar or typos, but there’s two things that stuck out –
“Rowan, after interacting with your father, you also come to me with your sister.”
Since it’s the mother who says this, I feel “interacting” is the wrong word choice. It feels too impersonal and like it fits better in a game tutorial, if that make senses. Perhaps simply “speaking” or “talking” would be better.
I know the news of Blackburn was su to you.
Was “su” supposed to be “a surprise”?
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.