Hello hello. I’d like to ask for public opinion about a WIP I’m currently writing.
frantic noises of embarrassment
It’s been more than a year since I last wrote a literary work (excluding those depressed poetry I randomly write) and now I’m trying my hand at writing a choicescript game.
Title: Velos
Blurb
You are a bright-eyed youth trying to pave your way in Velos. Having been accepted in the kingdom’s greatest academy, you left your ager and started to anticipate a new life.
Yet Diés have different plans.
Rebellion, terrors, and overwhelming responsibilities come your way as you began to realize a power concealed deep within your being. Turns out the academy did not accept you for what you could offer, but for what you are.
Be ushered to an elite group of Draello’s best. Form companionships and maintain your marks. Unravel the conundrum behind the mist of secrecy that engulfs the kingdom of Velos.
Besides, entrusting the fate of Velos to mere students. What could possibly go wrong?
What's it about?
The story takes place in a high fantasy world. Specifically, the kingdom of Velos. The MC is a young person ready to set out into the capital, Milton, to pursue their dream of entering the most renowned academy, Draellos.
The first few days were alright. They were serene. However, a sudden terror act immeditely turned the kingdom upside down. A death threat to the king. Terror bombings. Massacres.
The sudden treasonous deeds definitely blindsided the king and he must do something to protect his kingdom and his throne.
With most of the kingdom soldiers decimated, the king has no choice but to utilize Draello in his plans. A decree to form an elite group of students was ordered out of the blue and the MC was unexpectedly selected despite their obviously lacking skills.
However, it was not an incidental choice. The MC was accepted into Draello and was selected to be in the elite group not because of what they could offer, but because of what they are.
A spawn of Diès.
Any suggestions or bloody reactions would be graciously accepted. Thank you.