I, the Unbroken One [ITFO Sequel] [August 19, 2025] [Short Story Poll]

then its good that there are indivdual combat situation that matter in game ……. oh wait there are non :unamused_face:

also weapon master mc making hes man best at stabing people in straigt up battle is not that hard to imagine.

weapon master mc makes most of your man better stabing people which dose matter in real battles, there is close to 0 reason why regimentation army should be better at it, yes regimentation Should let you cordinate better which is shown in them defending from archer fire they can easly reinforce flanks and also do generaly keep cohesion much better Which are all things that regimentation lets you do On top of somhow also being better at stabing people.
Upgrade is called formation figting your people are taught how to deal more damage with formations and then still somhow fail in that which is frankly more unlikly then alternative

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I personally am very against trying to achieve balance on all paths. I find it immersion breaking.

He is though. It just doesn’t matter that much in a battle with 15-20k people engaged like the final battle of game one how good one single guy is at fighting.

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just to be on same page
these is what upgrades do.
if (skill_FormationFighting = 0) #In basic formation fighting and weapons handling.
*set skill_FormationFighting 1

	You started by establishing a basic semblance of organization. Borrowing from the Ravarian legions of old, you divided the troops into squadrons of fifteen, known as a "contubernium." Each of these is led by a "decanus" and his second-in-command.
	
	These squadrons practiced together with blunted weapons. They receive basic drills on how to effectively fight in formation.
	
	Even this basic training can turn the tide of a battle.

selectable_if (canweapons = true) #[Weapons + Formation Fighting] In continuing their weapon drills, so that they may be more effective in formation.
*set skill_FormationFighting + 1

	You've begun the process of standardizing the retinue's equipment. It's difficult to manage. The men of the retinue provided their own equipment. They are peasants, after all, and have barely had any formal training.
	
	It's been a trial by fire for them.
	
	You drill them on various standard formations, emphasizing the power of the spear. Such formations, despite looking basic to the eye, are highly effective.	

you will be suprised to see that formation figting mc drills man to fight in wait for it :face_with_peeking_eye: in big formations :melting_face:

also they should get standardizing equipment wich should make them much more effective but lol no, :unamused_face:

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Have to disagree here, of the three specializations, it’s made pretty obvious by the description that weapons is only going to be useful in individual combat. Yes, for the sake of balance it’s not great, but for the sake of the story, it makes sense. Yes, it’s more or less like playing on hard mode, but it’s the realistic consequences of the thing.

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Discusion here is if you train troops to figh in formations and then give them standartized equipment should they be somhow worse at it if you dont do that?

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You’re not understanding what I’m saying.

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can you explain once more what are you saying then

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I think it’s better if we drop it. We’re talking in circles because we’re coming at this from very different conceptions about how warfare works.

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Both of these are so cursed I wrapped around to loving it, and I want to see you both out-cursed each other. Although the only way Rade x Marshal would be even more cursed is if it were toxic surprise incest.

I did not know that Rade always had black hair and gray eyes, which is what my main Marshal has, until I looked at the code. So I always thought that the Marshal’s mother was Rade’s illegitimate commoner half-sister from an affair. And Veluska could still be Rade’s half-sister, but she and her family don’t know that.

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And this is how I learn I’ve been drawing his eyes wrong this whole time


It’s just like when I drew Uly as white a billion times before I realized they have copper skin

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Veluska x Mira fanfic

Mira cupped Veluska’s soft face in her hand. “Our son has your eyes,” she said lovingly.

“Yes, he does. I only wish he had more of me in him, and less of that man.”

“Hush now, soon he shall be nothing more than an unpleasant memory.”

As they spoke an indignant Sobik was being dragged through the courtyard to the cheering of a large crowd.

“You can’t do this!” He screamed, pulling and twisting in a vain attempt to free his arms from the iron grip of the soldiers. “I am the King! The damn King!” His hair was dirty and longer than he usually keeps it after his stint in the dungeon.

“Shut up you wretch,” one of the guards backhanded him, sending a tooth flying.

Sobik blinked in disbelief until his sight landed on his son in the crowd. “My son! I am your father, I command you to help me!” He tried to pull free once more.

“How dare you give orders to the crown prince!” The guard who had struck him earlier shouted, raising his hand again.

Said crown prince, a mere seven year old child, tugged at his mother’s dress.

“Mummies, who is that man?”

Veluska crouched down and wrapped him in a hug. “That’s Sobik, he’s a very very bad man dearest. But don’t be scared, he can’t hurt you now.”

Mira too crouched down and placed her hand on her son’s shoulder. “You shouldn’t be watching this. How about you go back inside and we’ll have the kitchens cook you up something tasty, hmmm?”

“Apple pie!” the Prince cheered with enthusiasm.

“Pie it is,” Mira ruffled her son’s hair with a smile. “Run along and tell the kitchens the Queens want them to bake a fresh apple pie, and then we’ll share it together as a family.”

“Yaaaay!” The crown prince ran inside with a wide grin on his face, thoughts full of warm apple pie and Sobik already forgotten.

“What is this foul sorcery?” Sobik screamed. “Veluska you witch! You’ve done something to my son and corrupted my wife! I demand everyone cease this insanity at once!”

Veluska straightened and met Sobik’s eyes with a harsh glare. “I think you mean my son and my wife.”

Sobik continued screaming, red in the face, even as the priest tried to read him his last rites.

“You can’t do this. I’m the King! Execute her, not me!”

From the crowd a week old tomato soared through the air to burst upon Sobik’s face with pinpoint accuracy. He sputtered indignantly, trying to shake off the foul smelling fruit only to be struck by another.

The incoherent screams of rage didn’t cease until the headsman’s axe brought them to a sudden and final stop. Everyone cheered. Even Darin was there with his wife and son, who were both alive, happy, and healthy. Instead of joining the army Darin had found his calling as a pianist and as the court musician was a rather wealthy man.

Mira and Veluska celebrated by enjoying a freshly baked apple pie with their son.

Afterward they walked arm in arm to their shared room, Veluska leaning her head on Mira’s shoulder.

“Come my love,” Mira said, wrapping her arms around Veluska. “Let us make some siblings for our son.” Veluska simply smiled and closed the doors behind them for a little privacy.

Now, I’m sure you’d like me to describe it in the most intimate of details.

So naturally I shall indulge, leaving no details to the imagination.

The doors to the private room are a beautiful piece of art carved seventy years earlier during the reign of King Jadowick. They are each made from different wood so they both have a different shade of brown, with each being carved whole from a single continuous piece of wood along with a twin door elsewhere which I’ll get to later.

The left door is made of sturdy oak from the forests of Kanton and is carved with the bird symbol of house Stiedry soaring above various animals that can be found in the Kantonian forests. Rabbits, deer, and the like. Among them is a Kantonian bowman, setting aside his weapon and reaching towards a figure on the right door.

The right door meanwhile is carved from the jungle kapok trees of Krorid. In addition to the animals that are typical of the Krorid forests, the figure represented carries a crossbow. A clear symbol of the mighty rangers that are the pride of the Kroridian army. He too is setting aside his crossbow and reaching to the bowman on the left.

The doors were made to celebrate the enduring friendship between Kanton and Krorid. The twin of each door being installed in the capital of the jungle nation. Everything mirrored, with the oak door on the right and the kapok wood door on the left.

The doors had stood undamaged for the entire seventy years, barring a minor incident involving a young Sobik, a knife, an angry goat, and half a bottle of vinegar. They replaced an aged set of doors made in the Ravarian style which can still be found on display on a side corridor of the castle. They’re too aged to be used as doors anymore however still make for an impressive sight which students on Ravarian history sometimes make a trip to visit.

And so began the golden age of Kanton as its wise queens led it to the height of peace and prosperity. Elya would be born 9 months later. The Erisians never invaded Krorid and the young prince would grow up never knowing war.

I would post it on my AO3, but I’m worried that my regular readers would flay me alive for not updating any of my main stories for a year only to emerge from the swamps to drop complete nonsense before descending back into the murky depths.

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Okay, first off how dare you write a line so good in that.

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You guys actually know my book better than I do at this point lol

Noted. Shall be fixed in new update.

Oh god, I have no idea. I hope it isn’t any longer than 700k or else I’m gonna be working on this for the next 700 years. I like ITFO but man, I got other stuff I wanna write before I’m 80 lol.

I’m not going to touch the balancing of ITFO atm. I want to finish ITUO before I even consider it. Too many ongoing projects already lol.

i am officially cancelling this book.

say-that-again

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Alrighty then.

@fsix Fair enough.

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Ok this is actually peak :sob:. The best timeline.

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Just rename it to I, the Cursed One. /s

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And here I was barely a week ago bragging that this game has one of the more levelheaded fan bases

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The best/worst part is this is still fairly accurate assessment.

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wdym we’re completely normal

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The bar is somewhere under theMariana trench so it’s not exactly hard to cross, yeah

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