I, the Unbroken One [ITFO Sequel] [August 19, 2025] [Short Story Poll]

It’s funny that dark games with little room for ship wars have chill and jokey fan bases, and that ITFO fits that trend.

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Yeah this is actually still true. I’ve found the community for my works to be quite relaxed and funny, which is very ironic considering the dark subject matter of the book. Maybe the lack of large numbers of ROs actually helps with that, as most of the arguments about IF rest in the romance.

I think the most contentious thing is whether or not the usurper is “right” and what level of vengeance is warranted. Haven’t seen a single Sobik Stan in any of these threads lol.

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The number of ROs seem to correlate with how many arguments people seem to get into.

But so do the amount of siblings, like Sword of Rhivenia where people constantly argue on who is the best sibling, who can be the most trusted, who is a shithead. Ahh, how fun those arguments were…

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Well, the best thing about this universe? Everyone is awful! And nothing fosters love more than hate.

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Elya isn’t awful. And neither is Darin. Or Milon, Lada, or Obren. Father Miljenko and Berserker Ranger are pretty cool dudes too.

@Randor_Kutsarin I think it also helps that Elya is always nice and genuine to the Marshal (and if she isn’t it’s because you started it by going the Usurper route), and Vedran always betrays you (whether he feels remorseful or not is what the relationship value determines). That and you have the option to usurp Elya, kill Vedran (quickly, slowly, or have Velinor plant an arrow in his skull while he monologues), and steal Vedran’s BF.

r/SobikDidNothingWrong is probably going to be formed as you type.

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My Usurper Marshal: I could never kill my own brother. Velinor, do the thing.

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I just realized that Belos and Vedran are never mentioned in this fanfic. This implies that in a perfect world, they do not exist.

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I like to kill Vedran as the weapons master, by wounding him during his betrayal. Gets him off the board and out of the way of things, and does it in a perfectly reasonable and unobjectionable way at a time when nobody is going to have an issue with it.

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The annoying thing for me now is that there’s just so much fun variation if he’s alive even at this point yet that scene is so good so I don’t know what I’m gonna do with my usurper

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You could just kill him during the escape attempt. Or just have Velinor shoot him at low Respect, in book 1.

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Do a tactics Marshall to get the Atiming River Massacre and Dread Max. Even if it’s not the most beneficial thing, one sure thing, is that it’ll feel, good~

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I need to catch up however.

The idea of only getting one RO choice.

F/F experiences.

I have too many to put in that had only 1 (always did shotgun wedding FO2, put her in power armor to keep her safe).

If the story and characters hit Favorite list. I do multiple runs.

Really depends on how much was done to make it the best. Multiples were mostly more recent events.

“Quality over Quantity, V”

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Great work so far! Dropping by just to make sure you haven’t forgotten about your promises:

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I get the Massacre event and scare the Rade event. Im tiny and not intimidating either. Underestimated a lot. That wont happen in Book 2 me thinks.

Destroyed 3 armies, killed a ‘Giant’ (very short)

Side note.

The Duke Milon is technically safe where he is anyway. Proper defense of his walls limits the horse archers. While his longbowmen are bit harder to deal with for the horse archers.

I took his canons first time around. Each time too. No reason not to. Id rather Rade not have them from Book 1

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OMG I CAN’T BELIEVE ALL MY DREAMS ARE COMING TRUE

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Rade could just be a common name in Kanton, since this guy hasn’t been introduced. I doubt he’s Rade Mozoroff.
(I know this is joke, so I am joking too)

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Bacon will add 20 ROs all named Rade so I can finally have my Rade harem

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The people who are awful are pretty unambiguously awful. The issue is never whether or not the awful people are or are not terrible, but rather to what extent do they deserve blame and what “justice” is necessary.

People gonna be asking for a Sobik romance soon smh.

Watch me hit this clip.

It’s gonna get worse now. I just finished the very first scene of a possible redemption arc

I, the Forgotten Promises

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Have Sobik come back as a Force Ghost to teach his children to be rulers as great as he was.

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Maybe MC can get Velinor to dress up as Sobik for some roleplaying, for a small fee.

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