Horse: Foal Throttle (WIP) (Demo Update 22-August-18)

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#61

UPDATE ON CHAPTER 2 PROGRESS: I’m going to have to stop writing for a little while (perhaps a few weeks). An old family friend passed away a few days ago.


#62

I am so sorry to hear that. Sending good thoughts and warm wishes your way.


#63

I’m so sorry to hear that, it always sucks to lose someone you care about. Take your time and come back when you’re ready to be silly again.


#64

I had been observing this WIP for awhile now, but I understand. Life always comes first always say. Please take your time, and I hope for good things to come your way in the future. Stay safe, happy, and keep enjoying writing. Best of luck :wink:


#65

Okay i have gotten annoyed at myself for having writers block and stuff, so i’ve just decided to blast britney spears and write anything that comes to mind.
i hope to put out an update later tonight (within a matter of hours) and get this over with.
after all, i can just edit out the bad parts later, right? :sunglasses::point_right:


#66

Seems pretty hilarious! :joy: found one error


#67

thanks for letting me know!!
it should be fixed now :+1:


#68

Now there’s another story with a unique premise I can get behind.

Though there’s one thing about this that I don’t understand, what’s with certain characters poking fun at the MC for not dressing themself when the MC is, you know, a horse?

I’m no expert on horses, but I’m pretty sure horses can’t exactly put on saddles, or horseshoes, or bridles by themselves. Isn’t it like asking a dog to brush their own fur during shedding season?


#69

Horses are sexy. :wink: let me date another horse if I’m a horse! Lol it’ll be fun!


#70

@Misterian The MC is a horse. Correct. However, no one knows that Horse is, in fact, a horse. They all think that Horse is just an ordinary human.
I also didn’t specify that the clothes are saddles, horseshoes or bridles… just imagine a completely normal horse going around wearing a shirt and trousers and you’ll have a pretty good idea of how it’s meant to be :ok_hand:


#71

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#72

@Emzan

That’s even weirder.

Granted, it’s the funny kind of weird, people who think a horse is a human, implying that they’ve never seen a horse before. No wonder the MC’s compatriots are adventurers, they’re starting their careers knowing that they needed to get out more


#73

I think you misunderstood the conceit of the story. It’s not that the adventurers have never seen a horse, it’s that they think the horse MC is a human for comedy reasons.

It’s a farce, essentially.